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1 Samuel18:5–16

Saul Envies David

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1 Samuel 18:5–16 — Saul Envies David. Each verse below carries the full apparatus: the Berean Standard Bible, the vocalized original (tap any word), and a parsed breakdown of every term transcribed from the interlinear. Synthesized commentary, canonical threads, and the reading of Christ gather at the end, over the whole unit.

5“So David marched out and prospered in everything Saul sent him t…”+

5So David marched out and prospered in everything Saul sent him to do, and Saul set him over the men of war. And this was pleasing in the sight of all the people, and of Saul’s officers as well.

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Hebrew — tap a word ↓

ḏā·wiḏ way·yê·ṣê yaś·kîl bə·ḵōl ’ă·šer šā·’ūl yiš·lā·ḥen·nū šā·’ūl way·śi·mê·hū ‘al ’an·šê ham·mil·ḥā·māh way·yî·ṭaḇ bə·‘ê·nê ḵāl hā·‘ām šā·’ūl ‘aḇ·ḏê wə·ḡam bə·‘ê·nê

Literal — word-for-word from the original

And-went-out David in-all that sent-him Saul; he-acted-wisely [prospered]. And-Saul set-him over the-men of-the-war; and-it-was-good in-the-eyes-of all-the-people, and-also in-the-eyes-of the-servants-of Saul.

Where the English smooths the original

  • יַשְׂכִּ֔יל יַשְׂכִּיל (yaś·kîl, Hiphil of śâkal, H7919) is one word doing two jobs the English must split. Cambridge: “the word combines the ideas of prudence and consequent success.” Geneva glosses it flatly “he prospered in all his doings”; K&D renders “he acted wisely and prosperously.” BSB's “prospered” keeps the outcome and drops the discretion that produced it; the Hebrew refuses to separate them.
  • וַיִּיטַב֙ וַיִּיטַב (way·yî·ṭaḇ, Qal of yâṭab, H3190) is impersonal — “and it was good in the eyes of.” BSB's “this was pleasing in the sight of” is accurate but smooth; the idiom is a verdict formula, and the same eyes-plus-verb frame returns inverted three verses later at way·yê·ra‘ bə·‘ê·nāw (v. 8), “it was evil in his eyes.”
  • אַנְשֵׁ֣י הַמִּלְחָמָ֑ה אַנְשֵׁי הַמִּלְחָמָה (’an·šê ham·mil·ḥā·māh, H582 + H4421) is “the men of the war,” a construct chain, not a rank. Benson: “Not over all, for Abner was general… but he made him captain of his guard, or gave him some principal command.” Poole and Gill agree the post is real but subordinate; the Hebrew itself fixes no number, which is why v. 13 has to name one.
  • עַבְדֵ֥י עַבְדֵי (‘aḇ·ḏê, construct of ‘ebed, H5650) is “servants,” not “officers.” BSB's “officers” reads the court function correctly but loses the word's ordinary weight — these are Saul's slaves/retainers, and K&D's point depends on it: “the courtiers of the king, who are envious as a general rule.” Gill notes the text pointedly omits kol (“all”) before them, though it uses it of the people.
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דָוִ֜דḏā·wiḏSo DavidH1732
√ Dâvid — David, the youngest son of JesseNounpropermasculine singular
וַיֵּצֵ֨אway·yê·ṣêmarched outH3318
√ yâtsâʼ — to go (causatively, bring) out, in a great variety of applications, literally and figuratively, direct and proximConjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine singular
יַשְׂכִּ֔ילyaś·kîl[and] prosperedH7919
√ sâkal — to be (causatively, make or act) circumspect and hence, intelligentVerbHifilImperfectthird person masculine singular
śâkal — to be circumspect, and hence to prosper (Hiphil) The governing verb of the whole unit: it opens it here, carries it at v. 14 (maśkîl, participle — continuous action), and triggers Saul's dread at v. 15. Hiphil here is inwardly transitive — David acts with insight and therefore succeeds. K&D cross-refers the same form to Joshua 1:8, where success follows from meditating on the Torah; the narrator is quietly filing David under covenant blessing rather than luck.
בְּכֹל֩bə·ḵōlin everythingH3605
√ kôl — properly, the wholePreposition-bNounmasculine singular
אֲשֶׁ֨ר’ă·šerH834
√ ʼăsher — who, which, what, thatPronounrelative
שָׁאוּל֙šā·’ūlSaulH7586
√ Shâʼûwl — Shaul, the name of an Edomite and two IsraelitesNounpropermasculine singular
יִשְׁלָחֶ֤נּוּyiš·lā·ḥen·nūsent him to doH7971
√ shâlach — to send away, for, or out (in a great variety of applications)VerbQalImperfectthird person masculine singularthird person masculine singular
shâlach — to send out Imperfect with suffix: the sending is iterative, a standing pattern of commissions rather than one errand. Pulpit: “These expeditions were not upon a very large scale.”
שָׁא֔וּלšā·’ūland SaulH7586
√ Shâʼûwl — Shaul, the name of an Edomite and two IsraelitesNounpropermasculine singular
וַיְשִׂמֵ֣הוּway·śi·mê·hūset himH7760
√ sûwm — to put (used in a great variety of applications, literal, figurative, inferentially, and elliptically)Conjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine singularthird person masculine singular
sûwm — to put, set, appoint Saul's own act of promotion, and the same verb he will repeat at v. 13 when the promotion has become a way of getting David out of the room. The verb does not change; the motive does.
עַ֖ל‘aloverH5921
√ ʻal — above, over, upon, or against (yet always in this last relation with a downward aspect) in a great variety of applicationsPreposition
אַנְשֵׁ֣י’an·šêthe menH582
√ ʼĕnôwsh — a man in general (singly or collectively)Nounmasculine plural construct
הַמִּלְחָמָ֑הham·mil·ḥā·māhof warH4421
√ milchâmâh — a battle (iArticleNounfeminine singular
וַיִּיטַב֙way·yî·ṭaḇAnd this was pleasingH3190
√ yâṭab — to be (causative) make well, literally (sound, beautiful) or figuratively (happy, successful, right)Conjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine singular
yâṭab — to be good, pleasing The verdict clause. Israel's eyes and the court's eyes return the same judgment here; the rest of the unit is the story of one pair of eyes (v. 8, v. 9) breaking ranks with everyone else's.
בְּעֵינֵ֣יbə·‘ê·nêin the sightH5869
√ ʻayin — an eye (literally or figuratively)Preposition-bNouncdc
כָל־ḵālof allH3605
√ kôl — properly, the wholeNounmasculine singular construct
הָעָ֔םhā·‘āmthe peopleH5971
√ ʻam — a people (as a congregated unit)ArticleNounmasculine singular
שָׁאֽוּל׃פšā·’ūland of Saul’sH7586
√ Shâʼûwl — Shaul, the name of an Edomite and two IsraelitesNounpropermasculine singular
עַבְדֵ֥י‘aḇ·ḏêofficersH5650
√ ʻebed — a servantNounmasculine plural construct
ʻebed — servant Ellicott makes this the hinge of the verse: the courtiers, of all people, do not resent him — “he seems to have disarmed all jealousy.” The single exception is the king, and the narrative will not say so yet.
וְגַ֕םwə·ḡamas wellH1571
√ gam — properly, assemblageConjunction
בְּעֵינֵ֖יbə·‘ê·nê. . .H5869
√ ʻayin — an eye (literally or figuratively)Preposition-bNouncdc
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It is deeply tragic to watch the gradual darkening of the once bright light, side by side with the irresistible increase in brilliance of the new star.
Maclaren reads vv. 5–16 as one arc and notes that v. 5 anticipates vv. 13–16 and is absent from the Septuagint — a literary judgment, not a textual verdict; keep it distinct from the manuscript facts in the apparatus.
Saul placed him above the men of war in consequence, made him one of their commanders; and he pleased all the people, and the servants of Saul also, i.e., the courtiers of the king, who are envious as a general rule.
the word combines the ideas of prudence and consequent success: and in spite of this sudden promotion, which might naturally have excited the jealousy of the courtiers, won their good-will.
The historian here calls especial attention to the strange power David was able to acquire over the hearts of men.
6“As the troops were returning home after David had killed the Phi…”+

6As the troops were returning home after David had killed the Philistine, the women came out of all the cities of Israel to meet King Saul with singing and dancing, with joyful songs, and with tambourines and other instruments.

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Hebrew — tap a word ↓

way·hî bə·ḇō·w·’ām bə·šūḇ dā·wiḏ mê·hak·kō·wṯ ’eṯ- hap·pə·liš·tî han·nā·šîm wat·tê·ṣe·nāh mik·kāl ‘ā·rê yiś·rā·’êl liq·raṯ ham·me·leḵ šā·’ūl lå̄·šūr wə·ham·mə·ḥō·lō·wṯ bə·śim·ḥāh bə·ṯup·pîm ū·ḇə·šā·li·šîm

Literal — word-for-word from the original

And-it-was in-their-coming, in-the-returning-of David from-striking the-Philistine, and-came-out the-women from-all the-cities-of Israel, singing and-the-dances, to-meet Saul the-king, with-tambourines, with-gladness, and-with-three-stringed-instruments.

Where the English smooths the original

  • מֵהַכּ֣וֹת מֵהַכּוֹת (mê·hak·kō·wṯ, Hiphil infinitive construct of nâkâh, H5221) is “from the striking of,” a verbal noun, not a past tense. BSB's “after David had killed the Philistine” fixes a single event; the Hebrew form is open, which is exactly the ambiguity Barnes and Pulpit exploit: “The allusion is not to Goliath, but to one of the expeditions referred to in 1 Samuel 18:5.” Poole and Geneva read it of Goliath. The Hebrew does not decide.
  • וְהַמְּחֹל֔וֹת וְהַמְּחֹלוֹת (wə·ham·mə·ḥō·lō·wṯ, mᵉchôlâh, H4246) — “and the dances,” a plural noun with the article, not the participle “dancing.” Ellicott records the Speaker's Commentary conjecture that the waw should be read as beth, giving “to sing in the dance.” A rare word: the Verifier finds it in only 8 verses in the whole Hebrew Bible, and they are nearly all victory or festival processions.
  • בְּשִׂמְחָ֖ה בְּשִׂמְחָה (bə·śim·ḥāh, simchâh, H8057) is an abstract noun — “with gladness” — not “with joyful songs.” BSB supplies “songs” because the word sits between two instruments; Cambridge draws the same inference honestly: “i.e. jubilant shouts and songs.” The supplement is an inference, not a lexical fact.
  • וּבְשָׁלִשִֽׁים וּבְשָׁלִשִׁים (ū·ḇə·šā·li·šîm, shâlîysh, H7991) is built on the root for “three.” BSB's “other instruments” is a guess dressed as a generality. Pulpit renders “with triangles”; Cambridge offers “either ‘triangles,’ or ‘three-stringed instruments’”; Gill records the Targum and Septuagint reading “cymbals.” We do not know what it was.
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וַיְהִ֣יway·hîAs the troopsH1961
√ hâyâh — to exist, iConjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine singular
בְּבוֹאָ֗םbə·ḇō·w·’āmvvvH935
√ bôwʼ — to go or come (in a wide variety of applications)Preposition-bVerbQalInfinitive constructthird person masculine plural
בְּשׁ֤וּבbə·šūḇwere returning homeH7725
√ shûwb — to turn back (hence, away) transitively or intransitively, literally or figuratively (not necessarily with the idea of return to the starting point)Preposition-bVerbQalInfinitive construct
דָּוִד֙dā·wiḏafter DavidH1732
√ Dâvid — David, the youngest son of JesseNounpropermasculine singular
מֵהַכּ֣וֹתmê·hak·kō·wṯhad killedH5221
√ nâkâh — to strike (lightly or severely, literally or figuratively)Preposition-mVerbHifilInfinitive construct
nâkâh — to strike (Hiphil) The same root the women will sing at v. 7 (hik·kāh) and that Saul will hurl at David at v. 11 (’ak·keh, “I will strike”). One verb runs from the Philistine's death, through the song, into the spear: the striking that made David famous is the striking Saul now wants done to him.
אֶת־’eṯ-H853
√ ʼêth — properly, self (but generally used to point out more definitely the object of a verb or preposition, even or namely)Direct object marker
הַפְּלִשְׁתִּ֔יhap·pə·liš·tîthe PhilistineH6430
√ Pᵉlishtîy — a Pelishtite or inhabitant of PeleshethArticleNounpropermasculine singular
הַנָּשִׁ֜יםhan·nā·šîmthe womenH802
√ ʼishshâh — a womanArticleNounfeminine plural
וַתֵּצֶ֨אנָהwat·tê·ṣe·nāhcame outH3318
√ yâtsâʼ — to go (causatively, bring) out, in a great variety of applications, literally and figuratively, direct and proximConjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person feminine plural
yâtsâʼ — to go out (feminine plural) The women “go out” of the cities with the same verb used of David going out to war in v. 5 and v. 13. The city's procession and the soldier's campaign share a word; the narrator lets the two meanings of “going out” meet in the road.
מִכָּל־mik·kālof allH3605
√ kôl — properly, the wholePreposition-mNounmasculine singular construct
עָרֵ֤י‘ā·rêthe citiesH5892
√ ʻîyr — a city (a place guarded by waking or a watch) in the widest sense (even of a mere encampment or post)Nounfeminine plural construct
יִשְׂרָאֵל֙yiś·rā·’êlof IsraelH3478
√ Yisrâʼêl — Jisrael, a symbolical name of JacobNounpropermasculine singular
לִקְרַ֖אתliq·raṯto meetH7122
√ qârâʼ — to encounter, whether accidentally or in a hostile mannerPreposition-lVerbQalInfinitive construct
הַמֶּ֑לֶךְham·me·leḵKingH4428
√ melek — a kingArticleNounmasculine singular
melek — king The women march out to meet the king. JFB: they “were merely paying the customary gratulations,” but the title here is the precise thing their song will fail to use.
שָׁא֣וּלšā·’ūlSaulH7586
√ Shâʼûwl — Shaul, the name of an Edomite and two IsraelitesNounpropermasculine singular
לָשׁוּרlå̄·šūrwith singingH7891
√ shîyr — to singPreposition-lVerbQalInfinitive construct
וְהַמְּחֹל֔וֹתwə·ham·mə·ḥō·lō·wṯand dancingH4246
√ mᵉchôlâh — a danceConjunctive waw, ArticleNounfeminine plural
mᵉchôlâh — a dance Rare (8 verses). It gathers Miriam at the sea (Exodus 15:20) and Jephthah's daughter (Judges 11:34) — and, darkly, the dance around the calf (Exodus 32:19). The victory dance in Israel is a woman's liturgy; it can crown a deliverance or damn a nation, and the narrator drops it here without telling us which this will prove to be.
בְּשִׂמְחָ֖הbə·śim·ḥāhwith joyful songsH8057
√ simchâh — blithesomeness or glee, (religious or festival)Preposition-bNounfeminine singular
בְּתֻפִּ֥יםbə·ṯup·pîmand with tambourinesH8596
√ tôph — a tambourinePreposition-bNounmasculine plural
tôph — tambourine, hand-drum Cambridge, citing observed Arab practice, describes it as “a hoop… over which a piece of parchment is distended. It is beaten with the fingers.” In only 16 verses, and it travels with mᵉchôlâh.
וּבְשָׁלִשִֽׁים׃ū·ḇə·šā·li·šîmand other instrumentsH7991
√ shâlîysh — a triple, iConjunctive waw, Preposition-bNounmasculine plural
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The Hebrew women, therefore, were merely paying the customary gratulations to David as the deliverer of their country, but they committed a great indiscretion by praising a subject at the expense of their sovereign.
The triumphant return of the young soldier does not refer to the homecoming after the death of the giant, but to the close of the campaign which followed that event.
The Sept. reads 1 Samuel 18:6 thus; “And the dancing women came out of all the cities of Israel to meet David , with tabrets and rejoicing and cymbals.
Cambridge is reporting the Greek, not the Hebrew: in the Septuagint the women come out to meet DAVID, not King Saul. That single variant would relocate the whole offence of the next verse, so it is recorded here and flagged in the apparatus rather than folded into the reading.
It is evident that this refers to some grand occasion, and probably to the conclusion of a peace between the two nations.
7“And as the women danced, they sang out: “Saul has slain his thou…”+

7And as the women danced, they sang out: “Saul has slain his thousands, and David his tens of thousands.”

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Hebrew — tap a word ↓

ham·śa·ḥă·qō·wṯ han·nā·šîm wat·tō·mar·nā wat·ta·‘ă·ne·nāh šā·’ūl hik·kāh bə·ʾal·pō wə·ḏā·wiḏ bə·riḇ·ḇō·ṯāw

Literal — word-for-word from the original

And-answered the-women, the-ones-making-merry, and-they-said: “Struck Saul in-his-thousands, and-David in-his-myriads.”

Where the English smooths the original

  • וַֽתַּעֲנֶ֛ינָה וַתַּעֲנֶינָה (wat·ta·‘ă·ne·nāh, ʻânâh, H6030) means “they answered / responded,” and here it is a technical musical term. BSB's “they sang out” loses the antiphony. Poole: “Answered one another; singing by parts alternately.” Maclaren hears two bands, one “overtopping” the other — which is precisely what makes the song an insult rather than a compliment.
  • הַֽמְשַׂחֲק֖וֹת הַמְשַׂחֲקוֹת (ham·śa·ḥă·qō·wṯ, Piel participle of sâchaq, H7832) is “the ones laughing / making sport,” rendered “as the women danced.” Pulpit warns the English reader off “played [instruments]”: the same word is a war-dance in 2 Samuel 2:14 and Samson's forced performance in Judges 16:25. It is bodily celebration, and Piel intensifies it.
  • בְּאַלְפּוֹ / בְּרִבְבֹתָֽיו בְּאַלְפּוֹ / בְּרִבְבֹתָיו (bə·ʾal·pō / bə·riḇ·ḇō·ṯāw, H505 / H7233) each carry the preposition bᵉ and a possessive suffix: “in his thousands” / “in his myriads.” English drops the preposition. The pair is a fixed poetic word-pair, not a body count; Cambridge: “For the Philistine champion was a host in himself.”
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הַֽמְשַׂחֲק֖וֹתham·śa·ḥă·qō·wṯAnd as the women dancedH7832
√ sâchaq — to laugh (in pleasure or detraction)ArticleVerbPielParticiplefeminine plural
sâchaq — to laugh, make merry, dance (Piel participle) A participle of ongoing action: they are mid-dance when the words come. The Piel of this root is the verb of David's own dancing before the ark (2 Samuel 6), which Michal will despise — the same joy, from the other side of the throne.
הַנָּשִׁ֥יםhan·nā·šîm. . .H802
√ ʼishshâh — a womanArticleNounfeminine plural
וַתֹּאמַ֑רְןָwat·tō·mar·nāvvvH559
√ ʼâmar — to say (used with great latitude)Conjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person feminine plural
וַֽתַּעֲנֶ֛ינָהwat·ta·‘ă·ne·nāhthey sang outH6030
√ ʻânâh — properly, to eye or (generally) to heed, iConjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person feminine plural
ʻânâh — to answer, respond Antiphonal singing, chorus answering chorus. Pulpit traces the psalms' parallelism and the church's chanting to this practice. The form is the plainest thing in the verse and the whole offence turns on it: praise sung in two halves inevitably ranks them.
שָׁאוּל֙šā·’ūlSaulH7586
√ Shâʼûwl — Shaul, the name of an Edomite and two IsraelitesNounpropermasculine singular
הִכָּ֤הhik·kāhhas slainH5221
√ nâkâh — to strike (lightly or severely, literally or figuratively)VerbHifilPerfectthird person masculine singular
nâkâh — to strike (Hiphil perfect) The women use of Saul the exact verb the narrator used of David at v. 6. They are not lying about Saul; they are placing him on the same scale as a boy, and losing him on it.
בְּאַלְפּוֹbə·ʾal·pō[his] thousandsH505
√ ʼeleph — hence (the ox's head being the first letter of the alphabet, and this eventually used as a numeral) a thousandPreposition-bNumbermasculine plural constructthird person masculine singular
וְדָוִ֖דwə·ḏā·wiḏand DavidH1732
√ Dâvid — David, the youngest son of JesseConjunctive wawNounpropermasculine singular
בְּרִבְבֹתָֽיו׃bə·riḇ·ḇō·ṯāwhis tens of thousandsH7233
√ rᵉbâbâh — abundance (in number), iPreposition-bNumberfeminine plural constructthird person masculine singular
rᵉbâbâh — myriad, ten thousand Rare (16 verses) and almost always the second, larger half of the fixed pair “thousands // myriads” (Genesis 24:60; Deuteronomy 33:17; Psalm 91:7). The escalation is built into the poetic form: a singer who begins with ’eleph must end with rᵉbâbâh. The women may have intended nothing but a well-made couplet. The form itself convicted the king.
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David his ten thousands; so they said, because David killed Goliath, which was the principal cause of all the following slaughter of the Philistines.
The women who “played”—i.e. danced and gesticulated—sang in antiphonal chorus ( Exodus 15:21 ) the refrain of a popular song, which evidently became widely current, as it was well known even among the Philistines
It was this alternate singing which led to the psalms being composed in parallel sentences, and not in metre; and we from the temple service have inherited our method of chanting antiphonally.
These words, which sing of the early glory of David in battle, are quoted again in 1Samuel 29:5 . They were, no doubt, the favourite refrain of an old national or folk-song.
8“And Saul was furious and resented this song. “They have ascribed…”+

8And Saul was furious and resented this song. “They have ascribed tens of thousands to David,” he said, “but only thousands to me. What more can he have but the kingdom?”

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Hebrew — tap a word ↓

lə·šā·’ūl way·yi·ḥar mə·’ōḏ way·yê·ra‘ bə·‘ê·nāw haz·zeh had·dā·ḇār nā·ṯə·nū rə·ḇā·ḇō·wṯ lə·ḏā·wiḏ way·yō·mer nā·ṯə·nū hā·’ă·lā·p̄îm wə·lî wə·‘ō·wḏ lōw ’aḵ ham·mə·lū·ḵāh

Literal — word-for-word from the original

And-it-burned to-Saul exceedingly, and-it-was-evil in-his-eyes, the-word the-this; and-he-said: “They-have-given to-David myriads, and-to-me they-have-given the-thousands — and-yet for-him only the-kingdom!”

Where the English smooths the original

  • וַיִּ֨חַר וַיִּחַר (way·yi·ḥar, chârâh, H2734) means “to glow, grow hot,” and it is impersonal with lᵉ: “it burned to Saul.” BSB's “Saul was furious” makes him the subject of his own rage; the Hebrew has the anger happen to him. Ellicott traces exactly that loss of mastery — “the unhingement of Saul's mind.”
  • וַיֵּ֤רַע בְּעֵינָיו֙ וַיֵּרַע בְּעֵינָיו (way·yê·ra‘ bə·‘ê·nāw, râʻaʻ, H7489) is the exact inversion of v. 5's וַיִּיטַב בְּעֵינֵי, “and it was good in the eyes of.” BSB's “resented this song” is idiomatic English and erases the mirror. Three verses earlier David was good in every eye in Israel; now he is evil in one.
  • הַדָּבָ֣ר הַדָּבָר (had·dā·ḇār, H1697) is “the word / the matter,” not “this song.” BSB narrows it helpfully but the Hebrew leaves the offence unnamed and therefore larger — it is the whole thing that has been said, and what it implies.
  • וְע֥וֹד ל֖וֹ אַ֥ךְ הַמְּלוּכָֽה וְעוֹד לוֹ אַךְ הַמְּלוּכָה — literally “and yet for him only the kingdom.” Not a question in the Hebrew. BSB's “What more can he have but the kingdom?” follows the traditional reading; Barnes renders it flat: “There is only the kingdom left for him.” Poole offers a third: “the kingdom certainly belongs to him.” The clause has no verb, and that is why it can be read three ways.
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לְשָׁא֜וּלlə·šā·’ūlAnd SaulH7586
√ Shâʼûwl — Shaul, the name of an Edomite and two IsraelitesPreposition-lNounpropermasculine singular
וַיִּ֨חַרway·yi·ḥarwas furiousH2734
√ chârâh — to glow or grow warmConjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine singular
chârâh — to glow or grow warm The idiom of kindled anger. It binds this verse to Exodus 32:19, where Moses' anger burns at the sight of a dance (mᵉchôlâh) — the only other place the Verifier finds both lexemes together. There the rage is righteous; here the dance is innocent and the burning is not.
מְאֹ֗דmə·’ōḏ. . .H3966
√ mᵉʼôd — properly, vehemence, iAdverb
וַיֵּ֤רַעway·yê·ra‘and resentedH7489
√ râʻaʻ — properly, to spoil (literally, by breaking to pieces)Conjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine singular
râʻaʻ — to be evil, to spoil (by breaking to pieces) The root's concrete sense is shattering. Set against yâṭab in v. 5, the pair forms the narrative's moral spine: what is good in all Israel's eyes is broken in Saul's, and the breaking is in the beholder.
בְּעֵינָיו֙bə·‘ê·nāw. . .H5869
√ ʻayin — an eye (literally or figuratively)Preposition-bNouncdcthird person masculine singular
הַזֶּ֔הhaz·zehthisH2088
√ zeh — the masculine demonstrative pronoun, this or thatArticlePronounmasculine singular
הַדָּבָ֣רhad·dā·ḇārsongH1697
√ dâbâr — a wordArticleNounmasculine singular
נָתְנ֤וּnā·ṯə·nūThey have ascribedH5414
√ nâthan — to give, used with greatest latitude of application (put, make, etcVerbQalPerfectthird person common plural
nâthan — to give Repeated twice in one breath. Saul's grievance is about who dispenses honour: the women have given, and a king who must be given what he has is no longer sure he holds it.
רְבָב֔וֹתrə·ḇā·ḇō·wṯtens of thousandsH7233
√ rᵉbâbâh — abundance (in number), iNumberfeminine plural
לְדָוִד֙lə·ḏā·wiḏto DavidH1732
√ Dâvid — David, the youngest son of JessePreposition-lNounpropermasculine singular
וַיֹּ֗אמֶרway·yō·merhe saidH559
√ ʼâmar — to say (used with great latitude)Conjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine singular
נָתְנ֖וּnā·ṯə·nūbut onlyH5414
√ nâthan — to give, used with greatest latitude of application (put, make, etcVerbQalPerfectthird person common plural
הָאֲלָפִ֑יםhā·’ă·lā·p̄îmthousandsH505
√ ʼeleph — hence (the ox's head being the first letter of the alphabet, and this eventually used as a numeral) a thousandArticleNumbermasculine plural
וְלִ֥יwə·lîto me
Conjunctive wawPrepositionfirst person common singular
וְע֥וֹדwə·‘ō·wḏWhat moreH5750
√ ʻôwd — properly, iteration or continuanceConjunctive wawAdverb
ל֖וֹlōwcan he have
Prepositionthird person masculine singular
אַ֥ךְ’aḵbutH389
√ ʼak — a particle of affirmation, surelyAdverb
הַמְּלוּכָֽה׃ham·mə·lū·ḵāhthe kingdomH4410
√ mᵉlûwkâh — something ruled, iArticleNounfeminine singular
mᵉlûwkâh — kingship, kingdom The word Saul cannot say without reaching for a spear. Ellicott and K&D both preserve O. v. Gerlach's judgment that Saul's jealousy contained “a deep inward truth” — the rejection announced by Samuel (1 Samuel 15:28) is now walking around the palace playing a harp. Saul is not wrong about the facts. He is wrong about what to do with them.
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Rather, "There is only the kingdom left for him." Compare for the same sentiment, 1 Kings 2:22 . "A kingdom (says Camden) brooketh no companion, and majesty more heavily taketh injuries to heart.
This dread expectation of ruin and dethronement had been a powerful factor in the causes which had led to the unhingement of Saul
Partly because they called him plain Saul, and not King Saul; did not give him his royal title
Gill's suggestion that the offence lay in the women omitting the royal title is his own inference from the song's wording, not something the Hebrew states. It is a plausible reading of a real feature of the text.
What greater honour can they give him but that of the kingdom? Or thus, And moreover . this will not rest here, they will certainly give him the kingdom; they will translate the crown from me to him. Or thus, And moreover , the kingdom certainly belongs to him , i.e. I now perceive that this is the favourite of God, and of the people; this is that man after God’s own heart, to whom Samuel told me that God would transfer my kingdom.
9“And from that day forward Saul kept a jealous eye on David.”+

9And from that day forward Saul kept a jealous eye on David.

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way·hî ha·hū mê·hay·yō·wm wā·hā·lə·’āh šā·’ūl ʿå̄·wōn ’eṯ- dā·wiḏ

Literal — word-for-word from the original

And-Saul was eyeing David from-the-day the-that and-onward.

Where the English smooths the original

  • עָוֹן עָוֹן — the consonants as written (Kethib) are those of ʻâvôn, H5771, “perversity, iniquity,” which is what the interlinear here tags. The reading tradition (Qere) points it as עוֹיֵן, a denominative participle from ʻayin, “eye.” K&D states it plainly: “a denom. verb, from עין, an eye, looking askance, is used for עוין (Keri).” English “kept a jealous eye on” follows the Qere. The written text, unpointed, says something closer to “Saul was iniquity toward David.” Both readings are ancient; the page holds them together.
  • וָהָֽלְאָה וָהָלְאָה (wā·hā·lə·’āh, H1973) is spatial before it is temporal — “to the distance, beyond.” Joined to “from that day,” it stretches the look out past the end of the book. BSB's “forward” is right and colourless; Ellicott hears the whole rest of Samuel in it: “All our memories of Saul seem bound up with his life-long murderous pursuit of David.”
  • מֵהַיּ֥וֹם הַה֖וּא מֵהַיּוֹם הַהוּא (mê·hay·yō·wm ha·hū) — “from that day.” The narrator dates a disposition, not an act. Nothing happens in this verse; a way of looking begins, and the narrative treats that as the event.
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וַיְהִ֥יway·hîAndH1961
√ hâyâh — to exist, iConjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine singular
הַה֖וּאha·hūfrom thatH1931
√ hûwʼ — he (she or it)ArticlePronounthird person masculine singular
מֵהַיּ֥וֹםmê·hay·yō·wmdayH3117
√ yôwm — a day (as the warm hours), whether literal (from sunrise to sunset, or from one sunset to the next), or figurative (a space of time defined by an associated term), (often used adverb)Preposition-m, ArticleNounmasculine singular
וָהָֽלְאָה׃סwā·hā·lə·’āhforwardH1973
√ hâlᵉʼâh — to the distance, iConjunctive wawAdverb
hâlᵉʼâh — to the distance, onward A boundary word. Placed after “from that day,” it converts a moment into a permanent condition; the verse is the hinge on which the rest of 1 Samuel turns.
שָׁא֖וּלšā·’ūlSaulH7586
√ Shâʼûwl — Shaul, the name of an Edomite and two IsraelitesNounpropermasculine singular
עָוֹןʿå̄·wōnkept a jealous eyeH5771
√ ʻâvôn — perversity, iVerbQalParticiplemasculine singular
ʻâvôn / ʻûwn — iniquity; or (Qere) to eye, look askance The most contested word in the unit. Read with the Qere it is a participle of continuous action — not a glance but a watching, which Poole takes forensically: Saul “narrowly observed all his counsels and actions… that he might find some colourable pretence of putting him to death.” Read with the Kethib's consonants as ʻâvôn, the sentence names Saul's state rather than his gaze. Either way the verse reports a settled inward posture, and that is the point of its placement.
אֶת־’eṯ-H853
√ ʼêth — properly, self (but generally used to point out more definitely the object of a verb or preposition, even or namely)Direct object marker
דָּוִ֑דdā·wiḏon DavidH1732
√ Dâvid — David, the youngest son of JesseNounpropermasculine singular
Dâvid The object of the verb, marked with ʼêth. David does nothing in this verse — he is purely acted upon, as he will be for the next twelve chapters.
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From that day forward Saul was looking askance at David. עון, a denom. verb, from עין, an eye, looking askance
K&D is describing a Kethib/Qere situation: the consonants written are those of a different word from the one the reading tradition pronounces. His note is the source of our divergence entry, and it is a textual observation, not a conjecture.
With a suspicious jealousy which soon ripened into a deadly hatred.
Saul eyed David—that is, invidiously, with secret and malignant hatred.
From the hour on which the king listened to the people’s lilt in honour of the young hero, in Saul’s distempered mind hate alternated with love. He still in his heart longed for the presence of the only human being who could charm away his ever-increasing melancholia, but he dreaded with a fierce jealousy the growing influence of the winning and gifted man whom he had taken from the sheep-folds; and now through the rest of the records of this book we shall see how the hate gradually obscured the old love.
10“The next day a spirit of distress sent from God came upon Saul, …”+

10The next day a spirit of distress sent from God came upon Saul, and he prophesied inside the house while David played the harp as usual. Now Saul was holding a spear,

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way·hî mim·mā·ḥo·rāṯ rū·aḥ rā·‘āh ’ĕ·lō·hîm wat·tiṣ·laḥ ’el- šā·’ūl way·yiṯ·nab·bê ḇə·ṯō·wḵ- hab·ba·yiṯ wə·ḏā·wiḏ mə·nag·gên kə·yō·wm bə·yō·wm šā·’ūl bə·yā·ḏōw wə·ha·ḥă·nîṯ bə·yaḏ-

Literal — word-for-word from the original

And-it-was on-the-morrow, and-rushed a-spirit-of-God, evil, upon Saul, and-he-prophesied inside the-house; and-David playing with-his-hand as-day in-day; and-the-spear in-the-hand-of Saul.

Where the English smooths the original

  • וַתִּצְלַ֣ח וַתִּצְלַח (wat·tiṣ·laḥ, tsâlach, H6743) is far stronger than BSB's “came upon.” The root means “to push forward, rush” — and in its other register, “to prosper.” Pulpit translates “descended mightily upon Saul.” The chilling economy: the verb whose other face is prospering is the verb by which the evil spirit takes the king, on the very morning after David's prospering was sung in the streets.
  • ר֨וּחַ רָעָ֤ה אֱלֹהִ֨ים רוּחַ רָעָה אֱלֹהִים (rūaḥ rā‘āh ’ĕlōhîm) is a construct chain with the adjective wedged inside: “an evil spirit of God.” BSB's “a spirit of distress sent from God” supplies both “distress” for ra‘ (H7451, plainly “evil”) and “sent,” which is not in the Hebrew. The softening is theological, and it is worth seeing what it softens.
  • וַיִּתְנַבֵּ֣א וַיִּתְנַבֵּא (way·yiṯ·nab·bê, nâbâʼ, H5012) is Hithpael — reflexive/reciprocal stem. Pulpit and Ellicott both claim the Hithpael “is never used of real, true prophecy (which is always the Niphal), but of a bastard imitation of it.” K&D simply renders it “to rave.” Barnes flatly refuses: “It is impossible to give the sense of ‘raving’ to the word ‘prophesied.’” The commentators are divided, and the grammar alone does not settle it.
  • כְּי֣וֹם בְּי֑וֹם כְּיוֹם בְּיוֹם (kə·yō·wm bə·yō·wm) is “as day by day” — a doubled noun idiom, not the adverb “as usual.” The repetition matters: it establishes that David is doing the ordinary thing, at the ordinary hour, in the ordinary place, when the spear comes up.
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וַיְהִ֣יway·hîH1961
√ hâyâh — to exist, iConjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine singular
מִֽמָּחֳרָ֗תmim·mā·ḥo·rāṯThe next dayH4283
√ mochŏrâth — the morrow or (adverbially) tomorrowPreposition-mNounfeminine singular
רוּחַ֩rū·aḥa spiritH7307
√ rûwach — windNouncommon singular construct
רָעָ֤ה׀rā·‘āhof distressH7451
√ raʻ — bad or (as noun) evil (natural or moral)Adjectivefeminine singular
raʻ — bad, evil (natural or moral) The plain adjective. Pulpit's attempt to hold the tension is worth recording as his and not ours: “In all noble acts men are fellow workers with God; when evil carries them away it is of God, because he it is who has made and still maintains the laws of our moral nature.” The Hebrew asserts the source and does not explain it, and neither should we.
אֱלֹהִ֨ים׀’ĕ·lō·hîmsent from GodH430
√ ʼĕlôhîym — gods in the ordinary senseNounmasculine plural
וַתִּצְלַ֣חwat·tiṣ·laḥcameH6743
√ tsâlach — to push forward, in various senses (literal or figurative, transitive or intransitive)Conjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person feminine singular
tsâlach — to push forward, rush; to prosper The Verifier confirms that this exact verb (H6743) stands in 1 Samuel 10:6 alongside rûwach (H7307) and nâbâʼ (H5012) — the three words of this verse, in the same order of events, at Saul's anointing, where the Spirit of the LORD rushes on him and he prophesies. The same verb, the same king, the same two consequences, the opposite spirit. ⚙ That reversal, not a diagnosis of Saul's condition, is what the narrator is arguing.
אֶל־’el-uponH413
√ ʼêl — near, with or amongPreposition
שָׁאוּל֙šā·’ūlSaulH7586
√ Shâʼûwl — Shaul, the name of an Edomite and two IsraelitesNounpropermasculine singular
וַיִּתְנַבֵּ֣אway·yiṯ·nab·bêand he prophesiedH5012
√ nâbâʼ — to prophesy, iConjunctive wawVerbHitpaelConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine singular
nâbâʼ — to prophesy (Hithpael) Barnes will not let the word be drained: the prophesying here “was as directly the effect of the coming of the evil spirit upon Saul, as the ‘prophesying’ in 1 Samuel 10:10 was the effect of the Spirit of God coming upon him,” and he adds that madness and prophesying were held near akin (Jeremiah 29:26; 2 Kings 9:11). Geneva takes the popular-usage route instead. The stem is genuinely ambiguous and the unit is stronger for saying so.
בְתוֹךְ־ḇə·ṯō·wḵ-inside theH8432
√ tâvek — a bisection, iPreposition-bNounmasculine singular construct
הַבַּ֔יִתhab·ba·yiṯhouseH1004
√ bayith — a house (in the greatest variation of applications, especially family, etcArticleNounmasculine singular
וְדָוִ֛דwə·ḏā·wiḏwhile DavidH1732
√ Dâvid — David, the youngest son of JesseConjunctive wawNounpropermasculine singular
מְנַגֵּ֥ןmə·nag·gênplayed [the harp]H5059
√ nâgan — properly, to thrum, iVerbPielParticiplemasculine singular
nâgan — to thrum, play a stringed instrument (Piel participle) A participle against a string of consecutive imperfects: everything else in the verse lurches forward, David's playing simply continues. Gill draws out the humility — by now a commander at court, “he did not think it below him to act as a musician.”
כְּי֣וֹם׀kə·yō·wmvvvH3117
√ yôwm — a day (as the warm hours), whether literal (from sunrise to sunset, or from one sunset to the next), or figurative (a space of time defined by an associated term), (often used adverb)Preposition-kNounmasculine singular
בְּי֑וֹםbə·yō·wmas usualH3117
√ yôwm — a day (as the warm hours), whether literal (from sunrise to sunset, or from one sunset to the next), or figurative (a space of time defined by an associated term), (often used adverb)Preposition-bNounmasculine singular
שָׁאֽוּל׃šā·’ūlNow SaulH7586
√ Shâʼûwl — Shaul, the name of an Edomite and two IsraelitesNounpropermasculine singular
בְּיָד֖וֹbə·yā·ḏōwwas holdingH3027
√ yâd — a hand (the open one (indicating power, means, direction, etcPreposition-bNounfeminine singular constructthird person masculine singular
וְהַחֲנִ֖יתwə·ha·ḥă·nîṯa spearH2595
√ chănîyth — a lance (for thrusting, like pitching a tent)Conjunctive waw, ArticleNounfeminine singular
chănîyth — a spear, lance Cambridge: “The spear served as a sceptre, and was the symbol of royalty” — held in council (1 Samuel 22:6), in the house (19:9), by the table (20:33), planted at the pillow in camp (26:7). So the object Saul raises is not a weapon he fetched; it is the emblem of the office he is afraid of losing. He tries to keep the crown by throwing it.
בְּיַד־bə·yaḏ-. . .H3027
√ yâd — a hand (the open one (indicating power, means, direction, etcPreposition-bNounfeminine singular construct
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The conjugation employed here (Hithpahel) is never used of real, true prophecy (which is always the Niphal), but of a bastard imitation of it.
It is impossible to give the sense of "raving" to the word "prophesied," as though a merely natural state of frenzy were intended.
Barnes directly contradicts Pulpit and Ellicott on the same word. Both excerpts stand; the disagreement is real and the page does not adjudicate it.
The spear served as a sceptre, and was the symbol of royalty.
That is, spoke as a man beside himself for so the people abused this word, when they could not understand.
11“and he hurled it, thinking, “I will pin David to the wall.” But …”+

11and he hurled it, thinking, “I will pin David to the wall.” But David eluded him twice.

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šā·’ūl ’eṯ- way·yā·ṭel ha·ḥă·nîṯ way·yō·mer ’ak·keh ḇə·ḏā·wiḏ ū·ḇaq·qîr dā·wiḏ way·yis·sōḇ mip·pā·nāw pa·‘ă·mā·yim

Literal — word-for-word from the original

And-Saul hurled the-spear, and-he-said: “I-will-strike into-David and-into-the-wall!” And-David turned-aside from-before-him twice.

Where the English smooths the original

  • וַיָּ֤טֶל וַיָּטֶל (way·yā·ṭel, Hiphil of ṭûwl, H2904) — the root is “to pitch over, hurl.” Ellicott records that the Alexandrian Septuagint and the Chaldee render “lifted the javelin,” and judges the probable sense “brandished” or “aimed.” K&D keeps “hurled” but concludes Saul “probably swung it twice without letting it go out of his hand.” Cambridge agrees. The verb permits both; the fact that the text never says the spear struck the wall (contrast 1 Samuel 19:10) is the real evidence.
  • אַכֶּ֥ה בְדָוִ֖ד וּבַקִּ֑יר אַכֶּה בְדָוִד וּבַקִּיר — literally “I will strike into David and into the wall,” with bᵉ on both nouns. BSB's “pin David to the wall” renders the intent; the Hebrew names two targets and lets the violence of the sentence do the work. The verb is nâkâh (H5221) — the identical root the women sang of Saul and David at v. 7.
  • וַיִּסֹּ֥ב מִפָּנָ֖יו וַיִּסֹּב מִפָּנָיו (way·yis·sōḇ mip·pā·nāw, çâbab, H5437) is “and he turned round / away from his face,” not “eluded him.” BSB imports agility. Gill records Abarbanel's opposite reading — that David, eyes on his own hands, “turned himself from Saul without intention both times, and so escaped without knowledge of it.” On that reading the deliverance is entirely providence and not at all skill.
  • פַּעֲמָֽיִם פַּעֲמָיִם (pa·‘ă·mā·yim, H6471) is a dual — “a pair of times.” Poole distributes it across two occasions: “Once at this time, and another time upon a like occasion, 1 Samuel 19:10.” Gill allows both that and two throws in one sitting. The dual form itself is neutral.
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שָׁאוּל֙šā·’ūland heH7586
√ Shâʼûwl — Shaul, the name of an Edomite and two IsraelitesNounpropermasculine singular
אֶֽת־’eṯ-H853
√ ʼêth — properly, self (but generally used to point out more definitely the object of a verb or preposition, even or namely)Direct object marker
וַיָּ֤טֶלway·yā·ṭelhurled itH2904
√ ṭûwl — to pitch over or reelConjunctive wawVerbHifilConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine singular
ṭûwl — to pitch over, hurl A violent, rarely used verb. Whether it left his hand is the single most debated point in the unit, and it is debated because of a silence: the wall is named as a target and never named as a casualty.
הַחֲנִ֔יתha·ḥă·nîṯ. . .H2595
√ chănîyth — a lance (for thrusting, like pitching a tent)ArticleNounfeminine singular
וַיֹּ֕אמֶרway·yō·merthinkingH559
√ ʼâmar — to say (used with great latitude)Conjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine singular
אַכֶּ֥ה’ak·kehI will pinH5221
√ nâkâh — to strike (lightly or severely, literally or figuratively)VerbHifilImperfectfirst person common singular
nâkâh — to strike (Hiphil imperfect, 1cs) First person. The whole unit's chain of striking closes here: David struck the Philistine (v. 6), the women sang that both men struck their thousands (v. 7), and now the king says “I will strike.” The verb that made a nation's deliverer is turned on him by the man it also praised.
בְדָוִ֖דḇə·ḏā·wiḏDavidH1732
√ Dâvid — David, the youngest son of JessePreposition-bNounpropermasculine singular
וּבַקִּ֑ירū·ḇaq·qîrto the wallH7023
√ qîyr — a wall (as built in a trench)Conjunctive waw, Preposition-b, ArticleNounmasculine singular
דָּוִ֛דdā·wiḏBut DavidH1732
√ Dâvid — David, the youngest son of JesseNounpropermasculine singular
וַיִּסֹּ֥בway·yis·sōḇeludedH5437
√ çâbab — to revolve, surround, or borderConjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine singular
çâbab — to turn round, go about A wholly undramatic verb for a hairsbreadth escape. Henry's summary is the right register: “David's safety must be ascribed to God's providence.”
מִפָּנָ֖יוmip·pā·nāwhimH6440
√ pânîym — the face (as the part that turns)Preposition-mNouncommon plural constructthird person masculine singular
פַּעֲמָֽיִם׃pa·‘ă·mā·yimtwiceH6471
√ paʻam — a stroke, literally or figuratively (in various applications, as follow)Nounfd
paʻam — a stroke, a time (dual) Twice is the number that makes an accident into a pattern. It is also, as JFB notes, what finally frightened Saul: he “became impressed with a dread of David as under the special protection of Providence.”
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he probably swung it twice without letting it go out of his hand, - a supposition which is raised into certainty by the fact that it is not stated here that the javelin entered the wall
It is hardly credible that if he actually threw it, David would have trusted himself a second time in the king
Abarbinel thinks, that David, while he was playing, his eyes were so fixed upon his own hands, that he was not aware of the javelin, and turned himself from Saul without intention both times, and so escaped without knowledge of it
Gill is relaying the medieval Jewish commentator Abarbanel, not stating his own conclusion; the reading is valuable precisely as a witness to how the escape was understood outside the Christian commentary tradition.
The threatening gesture was twice repeated, and David prudently withdrew on both occasions.
12“So Saul was afraid of David, because the LORD was with David but…”+

12So Saul was afraid of David, because the LORD was with David but had departed from Saul.

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šā·’ūl way·yi·rā mil·lip̄·nê ḏā·wiḏ kî- Yah·weh hā·yāh ‘im·mōw ū·mê·‘im sār šā·’ūl

Literal — word-for-word from the original

And-feared Saul from-before David; because YHWH was with-him, and-from-with Saul he-had-turned-aside.

Where the English smooths the original

  • וַיִּרָ֥א מִלִּפְנֵ֣י וַיִּרָא מִלִּפְנֵי (way·yi·rā mil·lip̄·nê, yârêʼ, H3372) is “feared from before the face of” — a double preposition that makes fear a matter of physical recoil, not of opinion. BSB's “was afraid of David” is correct and flattens the picture: the king backs away from a face.
  • סָֽר סָר (sār, çûwr, H5493) — “had turned aside / departed.” The subject is YHWH. Three words later, at v. 13, Saul will “remove” David with the causative of this identical root (way·si·rê·hū): God turns aside from Saul, so Saul turns David aside from himself. BSB uses two different English verbs (“departed” / “sent away”) and the mirror vanishes.
  • עִמּ֔וֹ / וּמֵעִ֥ם עִמּוֹ / וּמֵעִם (‘im·mōw / ū·mê·‘im, both H5973) — the same preposition, once plain (“with him”) and once compounded with min (“from with”). One word, pivoted, carries the whole theology of the verse: presence and withdrawal are not two different relations but one, in two directions.
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שָׁא֖וּלšā·’ūlSo SaulH7586
√ Shâʼûwl — Shaul, the name of an Edomite and two IsraelitesNounpropermasculine singular
וַיִּרָ֥אway·yi·rāwas afraidH3372
√ yârêʼ — to fearConjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine singular
yârêʼ — to fear Saul's characteristic verb from here to Gilboa. Pulpit traces the arc: “this miserable feeling grew upon the unhappy king, till before the battle of Gilboa we find him with all his old heroic spirit gone.” The fear of the LORD which is the beginning of wisdom has been replaced in him by the fear of the LORD's servant.
מִלִּפְנֵ֣יmil·lip̄·nêofH6440
√ pânîym — the face (as the part that turns)Preposition-m, Preposition-lNouncommon plural construct
דָוִ֑דḏā·wiḏDavidH1732
√ Dâvid — David, the youngest son of JesseNounpropermasculine singular
כִּֽי־kî-becauseH3588
√ kîy — (by implication) very widely used as a relative conjunction or adverb (as below)Conjunction
יְהוָה֙Yah·wehthe LORDH3068
√ Yᵉhôvâh — Jehovah, Jewish national name of GodNounpropermasculine singular
Yᵉhôvâh The divine name enters the unit here for the first time, and immediately as the explanation () of everything already narrated. Up to this point the story ran on eyes, songs, anger and spears; the narrator now says the engine was never any of those.
הָיָ֤הhā·yāhwasH1961
√ hâyâh — to exist, iVerbQalPerfectthird person masculine singular
עִמּ֔וֹ‘im·mōwwith DavidH5973
√ ʻim — adverb or preposition, with (iPrepositionthird person masculine singular
ʻim — with The shortest word in the verse and the load-bearing one; it will be repeated at v. 14 as the last word of David's blessing.
וּמֵעִ֥םū·mê·‘imbutH5973
√ ʻim — adverb or preposition, with (iConjunctive waw, Preposition-m
סָֽר׃sārhad departedH5493
√ çûwr — to turn off (literal or figurative)VerbQalPerfectthird person masculine singular
çûwr — to turn off, depart Perfect tense — the departure is an accomplished fact, not a process. K&D locates the psychology exactly here: the fear “arose from the consciousness that the Lord had departed from him, — a consciousness which forced itself involuntarily upon him.” Saul is not afraid of a rival's competence; he is afraid of an absence in himself.
שָׁא֖וּלšā·’ūlfrom SaulH7586
√ Shâʼûwl — Shaul, the name of an Edomite and two IsraelitesNounpropermasculine singular
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The fear arose from the consciousness that the Lord had departed from him, - a consciousness which forced itself involuntarily upon him, and drove him to make the attempt, in a fit of madness, to put David to death.
Saul was conscious that his old vigour and ability were deserting him, and in David he recognised the presence of a power he knew had once been his.
In the Sept. (B) this verse follows immediately after the clause of 1 Samuel 18:8 , “to me they have ascribed but thousands,” and reads simply
Cambridge is recording that in Vaticanus this verse attaches directly to the middle of v. 8, with vv. 9–11 absent. That is a manuscript fact about the shape of the chapter, not a judgment on what the Hebrew says.
To his jealousy succeeded a sense of powerlessness, as knowing that a higher power was with David, while he had lost the Divine protection.
13“Therefore Saul sent David away and gave him command of a thousan…”+

13Therefore Saul sent David away and gave him command of a thousand men. David led the troops out to battle and back,

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šā·’ūl mê·‘im·mōw way·si·rê·hū way·śi·mê·hū lōw śar- ’ā·lep̄ way·yê·ṣê hā·‘ām way·yā·ḇō lip̄·nê

Literal — word-for-word from the original

And-Saul removed-him from-with-him, and-set-him for-himself chief-of-a-thousand; and-he-went-out and-he-came-in before the-people.

Where the English smooths the original

  • וַיְסִרֵ֤הוּ וַיְסִרֵהוּ (way·si·rê·hū, Hiphil of çûwr, H5493) is the causative of the very verb used of YHWH one verse earlier: God turned aside from Saul (sār), so Saul turns David aside from himself. BSB's “sent David away” is the right sense and breaks the mirror. K&D keeps it: “he removed him therefore from him.”
  • שַׂר־אָ֑לֶף שַׂר־אָלֶף (śar-’ā·lep̄, H8269 + H505) is “chief of a thousand” — a construct, not the paraphrase “command of a thousand men.” ʼeleph is the same word the women sang over Saul at v. 7. ⚙ The number Saul resented being credited with is now the exact size of the command he hands his rival.
  • וַיֵּצֵ֥א … וַיָּבֹ֖א לִפְנֵ֥י הָעָֽם וַיֵּצֵא … וַיָּבֹא לִפְנֵי הָעָם — “he went out and he came in before the people,” a fixed idiom of public leadership (Poole compares 2 Samuel 5:2 and 1 Samuel 29:6). BSB's “led the troops out to battle and back” interprets it militarily, which Gill and the Targum also do (“at the head of them”), but Poole notes the phrase can equally mean simply conducting public business.
  • מֵֽעִמּ֔וֹ מֵעִמּוֹ (mê·‘im·mōw, H5973 with min) — “from with him,” the identical compound used of YHWH leaving Saul in v. 12. The Hebrew says the same thing twice in two verses about two different departures; English translations render it once as “departed from” and once not at all.
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שָׁאוּל֙šā·’ūlTherefore SaulH7586
√ Shâʼûwl — Shaul, the name of an Edomite and two IsraelitesNounpropermasculine singular
מֵֽעִמּ֔וֹmê·‘im·mōw. . .H5973
√ ʻim — adverb or preposition, with (iPreposition-mthird person masculine singular
וַיְסִרֵ֤הוּway·si·rê·hūsent [David] awayH5493
√ çûwr — to turn off (literal or figurative)Conjunctive wawVerbHifilConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine singularthird person masculine singular
çûwr — to turn off, remove (Hiphil) ⚙ The unit's sharpest piece of design: the abandoned man reproduces his own abandonment. What was done to Saul by God in v. 12, Saul does to David in v. 13, with the same root in the causative stem. Ellicott reads the surface motive charitably — “the king dismissed him honourably from the Court” — and then adds the suspicion the next verses confirm.
וַיְשִׂמֵ֥הוּway·śi·mê·hūand gaveH7760
√ sûwm — to put (used in a great variety of applications, literal, figurative, inferentially, and elliptically)Conjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine singularthird person masculine singular
sûwm — to set, appoint The same verb as v. 5, where the appointment was a reward. Nothing in the word has changed. JFB names what has: “a military commission, which was intended to be an honorable exile.”
ל֖וֹlōwhim
Prepositionthird person masculine singular
שַׂר־śar-commandH8269
√ sar — a head person (of any rank or class)Nounmasculine singular
sar — a head person, chief A real rank at last. Cambridge: “What was summarily mentioned by anticipation in 1 Samuel 18:5 is here related with more detail in the order of time.” Pulpit reckons David only a centurion before this.
אָ֑לֶף’ā·lep̄of a thousand menH505
√ ʼeleph — hence (the ox's head being the first letter of the alphabet, and this eventually used as a numeral) a thousandNumbermasculine singular
וַיֵּצֵ֥אway·yê·ṣêDavid ledH3318
√ yâtsâʼ — to go (causatively, bring) out, in a great variety of applications, literally and figuratively, direct and proximConjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine singular
yâtsâʼ — to go out The verb of v. 5 and of the women's procession at v. 6, and it will return as a participle at v. 16. Saul's plan for removing David from view consists of sending him out where the whole nation watches him work.
הָעָֽם׃פhā·‘āmthe troops {out to battle}H5971
√ ʻam — a people (as a congregated unit)ArticleNounmasculine singular
וַיָּבֹ֖אway·yā·ḇōand backH935
√ bôwʼ — to go or come (in a wide variety of applications)Conjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine singular
לִפְנֵ֥יlip̄·nê. . .H6440
√ pânîym — the face (as the part that turns)Preposition-lNouncommon plural construct
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gave him a military commission, which was intended to be an honorable exile. But this post of duty served only to draw out before the public the extraordinary and varied qualities of his character, and to give him a stronger hold of the people's affections.
and principally, that hereby he might expose him to the greatest hazards, and in some sort betray him into the hands of the Philistines.
Poole states Saul's murderous intent as fact; the text of v. 13 does not say it. It is an inference from vv. 17 and 25, where Saul's design is made explicit, read backwards into this verse.
What was summarily mentioned by anticipation in 1 Samuel 18:5 is here related with more detail in the order of time.
not out of respect to him, and in honour of him, but partly to cover his malice, and please the people, and partly in hope that he might be slain by the enemy at the head of his troop
14“and he continued to prosper in all his ways, because the LORD wa…”+

14and he continued to prosper in all his ways, because the LORD was with him.

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way·hî ḏā·wiḏ maś·kîl lə·ḵāl də·rå̄·ḵå̄w Yah·weh ‘im·mōw

Literal — word-for-word from the original

And-was David in-all-his-ways acting-wisely; and-YHWH with-him.

Where the English smooths the original

  • מַשְׂכִּ֑יל מַשְׂכִּיל (maś·kîl, Hiphil participle of śâkal, H7919) is a participle, not a finite verb: settled, ongoing action — BSB's “continued to prosper” catches the aspect well but again picks only the success half of the word. Gill: “or ‘prospered’… as the word also signifies,” adding that Vatablus, Junius, Tremellius, the Targum and Jarchi all take it so. The same participle recurs in Saul's mouth, as it were, at v. 15.
  • לְכָל־דְּרָכָ֖ו לְכָל־דְּרָכָו (lə·ḵāl də·rå̄·ḵå̄w, derek, H1870) — “to / with respect to all his ways.” Derek is literally a trodden road; the noun makes David's success a matter of the paths he walks rather than the outcomes he collects. BSB's “in all his ways” is faithful; the metaphor beneath it is worth surfacing.
  • וַֽיהוָ֖ה עִמּֽוֹ וַיהוָה עִמּוֹ — two words, no verb: “and YHWH with him.” BSB supplies “because the LORD was with him,” adding both a copula and a causal conjunction that the Hebrew leaves out. The verbless clause simply sets the fact down beside the prospering, side by side, and lets the reader draw the line.
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וַיְהִ֥יway·hîand he continuedH1961
√ hâyâh — to exist, iConjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine singular
דָוִ֛דḏā·wiḏ. . .H1732
√ Dâvid — David, the youngest son of JesseNounpropermasculine singular
מַשְׂכִּ֑ילmaś·kîlto prosperH7919
√ sâkal — to be (causatively, make or act) circumspect and hence, intelligentVerbHifilParticiplemasculine singular
śâkal — to act circumspectly, prosper (Hiphil participle) The unit's frame-word in its most durable form. Gill takes the step the participle invites: “in this he was a type of Christ, Isaiah 52:13.” ⚙ That is Gill's citation, not a computed link; but the structure he is responding to is in the text — a servant who acts wisely, prospers, and is hated for it.
לְכָל־lə·ḵālin allH3605
√ kôl — properly, the wholePreposition-lNounmasculine singular construct
דְּרָכָ֖וdə·rå̄·ḵå̄whis waysH1870
√ derek — a road (as trodden)Nouncommon singular constructthird person masculine singular
derek — a road, as trodden Concrete before it is moral. The plural with suffix covers every road David is sent down by a king who hopes one of them kills him.
וַֽיהוָ֖הYah·wehbecause the LORDH3068
√ Yᵉhôvâh — Jehovah, Jewish national name of GodConjunctive wawNounpropermasculine singular
Yᵉhôvâh Second and last appearance of the divine name in the unit, and it closes the verse. K&D: David acted “so wisely and prosperously, that the blessing of the Lord rested upon all he did.” The narrator has now twice refused to let David's rise be explained by David.
עִמּֽוֹ׃‘im·mōwwas with himH5973
√ ʻim — adverb or preposition, with (iPrepositionthird person masculine singular
ʻim — with The last word of the verse, and the whole answer to Saul's question of v. 8. What David has more than Saul is not the kingdom yet. It is this preposition.
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in this he was a type of Christ, Isaiah 52:13 ; the reason of it follows: and the Lord was with him; from whom he had his wisdom and success
Gill's appeal to Isaiah 52:13 is his own cross-reference, offered without argument; we report it as his and claim no independently verified lexical basis for it.
He headed them in all their expeditions, with a bravery and conduct equally distinguished; greatest in command, but greater in his example.
So that he had great prudence in his conduct, and prosperous success following his designs; which are two principal qualifications of a general and of a prince
so wisely and prosperously, that the blessing of the Lord rested upon all he did.
15“When Saul saw that David was very successful, he was afraid of h…”+

15When Saul saw that David was very successful, he was afraid of him.

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šā·’ūl way·yar ’ă·šer- hū mə·’ōḏ maś·kîl way·yā·ḡār mip·pā·nāw

Literal — word-for-word from the original

And-saw Saul that he acting-wisely exceedingly, and-he-dreaded from-before-him.

Where the English smooths the original

  • וַיָּ֖גָר וַיָּגָר (way·yā·ḡār, gûwr, H1481) is a different verb from v. 12's yârêʼ, and the lexicon's root sense is startling: “properly, to turn aside from the road.” Cambridge marks it as escalation — “Stood in awe of him, a stronger expression than that in 1 Samuel 18:12, denoting primarily the avoidance of the person feared,” citing the Septuagint's εὐλαβεῖτο ἀπὸ προσώπου αὐτοῦ. BSB uses “was afraid” for both verbs and the escalation disappears.
  • מִפָּנָֽיו מִפָּנָיו (mip·pā·nāw, pânîym, H6440) — “from before his face,” the identical phrase used of David at v. 11, where David “turned aside from before” Saul's face to escape the spear. ⚙ Four verses later the same words describe Saul, and the roles have swapped: the man who dodged now has a king flinching away from his face.
  • וַיַּ֣רְא … אֲשֶׁר־ה֖וּא מְאֹ֑ד מַשְׂכִּ֣יל וַיַּרְא … אֲשֶׁר־הוּא מַשְׂכִּיל מְאֹד — “and he saw that he was acting-wisely exceedingly.” The verse is built on râʼâh (H7200), seeing: Saul's fear is not a rumour or a suspicion here but a conclusion drawn from evidence. Gill: “So that he could get no advantage against him.” It is the ⚙ tragic form of knowledge — he sees clearly, and the clarity is what destroys him.
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שָׁא֔וּלšā·’ūlWhen SaulH7586
√ Shâʼûwl — Shaul, the name of an Edomite and two IsraelitesNounpropermasculine singular
וַיַּ֣רְאway·yarsawH7200
√ râʼâh — to see, literally or figuratively (in numerous applications, direct and implied, transitive, intransitive and causative)Conjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine singular
râʼâh — to see The unit's eyes have been busy: good in every eye (v. 5), evil in his eyes (v. 8), the eyeing of v. 9. Here the eye finally reports accurately, and the accurate report is the worst news Saul has had.
אֲשֶׁר־’ă·šer-thatH834
√ ʼăsher — who, which, what, thatPronounrelative
ה֖וּאDavidH1931
√ hûwʼ — he (she or it)Pronounthird person masculine singular
מְאֹ֑דmə·’ōḏwas veryH3966
√ mᵉʼôd — properly, vehemence, iAdverb
mᵉʼôd — vehemence, exceedingly The same adverb that measured Saul's anger at v. 8 (“it burned to Saul exceedingly”) now measures David's success. The narrator uses one intensifier for both men, and lets the reader weigh them.
מַשְׂכִּ֣ילmaś·kîlsuccessfulH7919
√ sâkal — to be (causatively, make or act) circumspect and hence, intelligentVerbHifilParticiplemasculine singular
śâkal — to act wisely, prosper (Hiphil participle) Third occurrence of the frame-word, now as the content of what Saul sees. K&D states the double movement: “As the hand of the Lord was visibly displayed in David's success, so, on the other hand, Saul's rejection by God was manifested in his increasing fear of David.”
וַיָּ֖גָרway·yā·ḡārhe was afraidH1481
√ gûwr — properly, to turn aside from the road (for a lodging or any other purpose), iConjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine singular
gûwr — to turn aside from the road; to dread The root's home meaning is to turn off the road to lodge — hence “sojourn.” Used of fear it carries that flinch bodily: a dread that makes a man step out of the way. Cambridge is right that it outranks yârêʼ here; the king is no longer merely afraid, he is avoiding.
מִפָּנָֽיו׃mip·pā·nāwof himH6440
√ pânîym — the face (as the part that turns)Preposition-mNouncommon plural constructthird person masculine singular
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Stood in awe of him , a stronger expression than that in 1 Samuel 18:12 , denoting primarily the avoidance of the person feared
So that he could get no advantage against him, and he succeeded and was prosperous in all his enterprises, and was more and more in favour with the people: he was afraid of him; lest the time was drawing near that the kingdom should be rent from him, and given to David.
As the hand of the Lord was visibly displayed in David's success, so, on the other hand, Saul's rejection by God was manifested in his increasing fear of David.
16“But all Israel and Judah loved David, because he was leading the…”+

16But all Israel and Judah loved David, because he was leading them out to battle and back.

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wə·ḵāl yiś·rā·’êl wî·hū·ḏāh ’ō·hêḇ ’eṯ- dā·wiḏ kî- hū yō·w·ṣê wā·ḇā lip̄·nê·hem

Literal — word-for-word from the original

And-all Israel and-Judah loving David; because he going-out and-coming-in before-them.

Where the English smooths the original

  • אֹהֵ֖ב אֹהֵב (’ō·hêḇ, participle of ʼâhab, H157) is masculine singular after a compound plural subject — a real grammatical feature, not a slip. Gill: “The verb is singular, and denotes that everyone of them loved him in all the tribes of Israel, as well as in Judah his own tribe.” BSB's plural “loved” is unavoidable in English and loses the distributive force: not a crowd's mood, but each man's.
  • יִשְׂרָאֵל֙ וִיהוּדָ֔ה יִשְׂרָאֵל וִיהוּדָה — the two names stand separately, which the narrator did not have to do. Ellicott takes it as evidence about the book's compilation: the distinction “seems to point to the fact that the compiler of the Books of Samuel lived after the final separation of the ten tribes”; Pulpit says the same, while both concede (1 Samuel 11:8; 15:4) that the division was already old. ⚙ Whatever the date, the effect in context is that the one man both halves will later fight over is at this moment loved by both.
  • יוֹצֵ֥א וָבָ֖א יוֹצֵא וָבָא (yō·w·ṣê wā·ḇā, H3318 + H935) — two participles, “going out and coming in,” where v. 13 used two finite verbs for the same idiom. The shift to participles makes it David's settled character rather than a series of campaigns. BSB's “was leading them out to battle and back” supplies the battle; Cambridge renders the idiom simply “Acted as their leader in war.”
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וְכָל־wə·ḵālBut allH3605
√ kôl — properly, the wholeConjunctive wawNounmasculine singular construct
יִשְׂרָאֵל֙yiś·rā·’êlIsraelH3478
√ Yisrâʼêl — Jisrael, a symbolical name of JacobNounpropermasculine singular
וִיהוּדָ֔הwî·hū·ḏāhand JudahH3063
√ Yᵉhûwdâh — Jehudah (or Judah), the name of five IsraelitesConjunctive wawNounpropermasculine singular
אֹהֵ֖ב’ō·hêḇlovedH157
√ ʼâhab — to have affection for (sexually or otherwise)VerbQalParticiplemasculine singular
ʼâhab — to have affection for The unit ends on the verb it began under. In this chapter Jonathan loves David (v. 1), Michal will love David (v. 20), and here all Israel and Judah love David — while the one man who ought to love him has spent five verses learning to dread him. ⚙ The narrator never says Saul stopped loving David; Ellicott's reading is that “hate alternated with love” to the end.
אֶת־’eṯ-H853
√ ʼêth — properly, self (but generally used to point out more definitely the object of a verb or preposition, even or namely)Direct object marker
דָּוִ֑דdā·wiḏDavidH1732
√ Dâvid — David, the youngest son of JesseNounpropermasculine singular
כִּֽי־kî-becauseH3588
√ kîy — (by implication) very widely used as a relative conjunction or adverb (as below)Conjunction
kîy — because The verse gives the people's reason, not God's. They love him for his leadership; the narrator has already told us at v. 12 and v. 14 what is actually underneath it.
ה֛וּאheH1931
√ hûwʼ — he (she or it)Pronounthird person masculine singular
יוֹצֵ֥אyō·w·ṣêwas leading them out to battleH3318
√ yâtsâʼ — to go (causatively, bring) out, in a great variety of applications, literally and figuratively, direct and proximVerbQalParticiplemasculine singular
yâtsâʼ — to go out (participle) The last word about David in the unit is the same verb as the first (v. 5). Everything Saul did to move him — the promotion, the exile-by-command, the spear — left him doing exactly what he was doing at the start, only now in front of the whole nation.
וָבָ֖אwā·ḇāand backH935
√ bôwʼ — to go or come (in a wide variety of applications)Conjunctive wawVerbQalParticiplemasculine singular
לִפְנֵיהֶֽם׃פlip̄·nê·hemH6440
√ pânîym — the face (as the part that turns)Preposition-lNounmasculine plural constructthird person masculine plural
pânîym — face, before “Before them” — David at the head, the people behind. The same noun that has meant flinching away throughout (vv. 11, 12, 15) here means leading. Cambridge draws the moral: Saul removed him “partly perhaps in the hope that he might lose his life in battle… but the result was that he became firmly established in the affections of the people.”
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In David’s case, however, although he was of Judah, the future king was equally popular with the northern tribes.
The verb is singular, and denotes that everyone of them loved him in all the tribes of Israel
but the result was that he became firmly established in the affections of the people.
Consider Him that endured contradiction of sinners against himself, lest ye be weary and faint in your minds, Heb 12:3.
Henry's note covers 18:12–30 as a block, and this sentence is his own move from David's patience under persecution to Christ's; it is the source of our second Christ reading.

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i. One word for wisdom and for winning — vv. 5, 14–15

The unit is framed by a single Hebrew verb. At v. 5 David יַשְׂכִּיל (yaś·kîl, Hiphil of śâkal, H7919); at v. 14 he is מַשְׂכִּיל, a participle — the same act, now continuous; at v. 15 Saul sees that he is maśkîl exceedingly, and is afraid. Cambridge states the lexical fact: “the word combines the ideas of prudence and consequent success.” Geneva's marginal gloss reduces it to outcome — “he prospered in all his doings” — and Gill notes the Targum does the same. K&D, rendering “he acted wisely and prosperously,” refers the identical form to Joshua 1:8, which locates the success where the narrator wants it: in covenant, not in talent. Pulpit warns the English reader that “behaved himself wisely” is the primary meaning and “prosper” the derived one, and that v. 5 is “a summary of events which may have occupied a very considerable space of time.” ⚙ The unit's argument is carried by this word's double sense: David's competence and David's blessedness are not two things the reader is asked to weigh against each other. They are one word, and Saul can only hear it as a threat.

ii. The song in two choirs — vv. 6–7

The women וַתַּעֲנֶינָה (wat·ta·‘ă·ne·nāh, H6030) — they answer. Poole: “Answered one another; singing by parts alternately.” Pulpit adds that this antiphony is the ancestor of the psalms' parallel sentences and of liturgical chanting. Maclaren hears the mechanics of the insult in the form: one band “rang out, ‘Saul hath slain his thousands,’ while the other overtopped them by pealing out still more loudly and exultantly, ‘And David his ten thousands.’” ⚙ The escalation was in the poetry before it was in the politics: אֶלֶף // רְבָבָה is a fixed Hebrew word-pair, and the second half of such a pair is always the larger. The women may have been singing a well-made couplet. JFB judges them harshly anyway — they “committed a great indiscretion by praising a subject at the expense of their sovereign” — while Cambridge notes only that the refrain “evidently became widely current, as it was well known even among the Philistines.” Ellicott calls it “the favourite refrain of an old national or folk-song.” ⚙ A form of praise that ranks people will, sooner or later, produce a Saul.

iii. Burning, eyeing, and the sceptre that becomes a spear — vv. 8–11

Verse 8 is the exact photographic negative of v. 5. There וַיִּיטַב בְּעֵינֵי — “it was good in the eyes of” all the people and all the court. Here וַיֵּרַע בְּעֵינָיו — “it was evil in his eyes.” ⚙ Same idiom, same frame, one pair of eyes: the narrator has told us where the evil is located, and it is not in David. Barnes renders Saul's conclusion as a statement rather than a question — “There is only the kingdom left for him” — and quotes Camden: “A kingdom brooketh no companion.” Ellicott and K&D both preserve O. v. Gerlach's judgment that Saul's foreboding held “a deep inward truth,” since Samuel had already pronounced the kingdom torn away (1 Samuel 15:28). Then v. 9: the participle of watching, which K&D notes is written with the consonants of ʻâvôn, “iniquity,” and read by tradition as “looking askance” — the Kethib and the Qere between them say more than either. By v. 10 the same verb that means to prosper, צָלַח, has the evil spirit rushing the king. Cambridge supplies the detail that turns the scene: “The spear served as a sceptre, and was the symbol of royalty.” ⚙ Saul throws his own emblem of office at a harpist. Whether it left his hand is disputed — Ellicott reports the Alexandrian Septuagint and the Chaldee reading “lifted,” K&D and Cambridge conclude he swung it without releasing it — but the gesture is not in doubt, and Gill relays Abarbanel's reading that David, eyes on the strings, never saw it come.

iv. Fear on one side of the room, love on the other — vv. 12–16

Verse 12 finally names the cause: כִּי־יְהוָה הָיָה עִמּוֹ. K&D reads the psychology with unusual precision — Saul's fear “arose from the consciousness that the Lord had departed from him, a consciousness which forced itself involuntarily upon him.” ⚙ Then the verb pivots and nobody's English shows it: YHWH סָר (sār, H5493) from Saul, so Saul וַיְסִרֵהוּ (way·si·rê·hū, the causative of the same root) David from himself. The abandoned man reproduces his abandonment on the one person he cannot bear to see. JFB calls the command of a thousand “an honorable exile,” and Poole is blunter still: Saul acted “principally, that hereby he might expose him to the greatest hazards, and in some sort betray him into the hands of the Philistines.” It fails in the most public way possible. Benson: David “headed them in all their expeditions… greatest in command, but greater in his example.” Poole's summary of the outcome is the movement's thesis — “Thus God turned all Saul's devices upon himself, and to David's advantage” — and v. 16 records the result with a singular participle, which Gill catches: “The verb is singular, and denotes that everyone of them loved him.” Ellicott notes the mention of Israel and Judah separately, and its bearing on when the book was compiled. Cambridge draws the irony tight: Saul sent him away “partly perhaps in the hope that he might lose his life in battle… but the result was that he became firmly established in the affections of the people.”

Read under Sola Scriptura — this tool’s own fallible reading (⚙)

⚙ This is the tool's own fallible reading, offered to be tested against the text. Nobody in this unit does anything wrong to Saul. David obeys every order he is given and plays the harp at the usual hour. The women sing a true couplet in a standard poetic form. The court, which K&D observes is “envious as a general rule,” is pleased with him. The narrator has arranged a scene in which there is no injury — and the king is destroyed anyway. That is the unit's claim: envy is not caused, it is disclosed. What v. 5 calls good in the eyes of all Israel, v. 8 calls evil in his eyes, with the same idiom, about the same man, on the same evidence. Nothing changed but the eye. And Scripture gives us the reason before we can invent one: “because the LORD was with David, but had departed from Saul” (v. 12). The fear came from the absence, not from the rival. ⚙ Note then what Saul reaches for. Cambridge's evidence that the spear was the royal sceptre means Saul's murder weapon and his badge of office are the same object: to keep the kingdom he throws the kingdom, and misses. A throne held by force against the providence that gave it is already gone; the man who must kill to stay king has, in the act, stopped being one. ⚙ And notice what it costs David to be blessed — a sung compliment, a hurled sceptre, a promotion designed to kill him. The text will not let “the LORD was with him” be mistaken for an easy life. It means he is preserved, not that he is spared.

⚙ A machine's line, not a verse: Saul threw his own sceptre at a harpist, and hit the wall where his kingdom used to be.

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The same rush, the opposite spirit structural / thematic — confirmed

⚙ Verse 10 is Saul's anointing played backwards, and the evidence is lexical rather than thematic. At 1 Samuel 10:6 Samuel tells Saul that the רוּחַ of the LORD will צָלַח upon him and he will נָבָא. Here a rûwach that is evil tsâlach-es upon Saul and he nâbâʼ-s inside the house. Three words, the same sequence, the same man. The Verifier confirms all three are shared. Barnes, without appealing to the Hebrew, arrives at the identical point: the prophesying here “was as directly the effect of the coming of the evil spirit upon Saul, as the ‘prophesying’ in 1 Samuel 10:10 was the effect of the Spirit of God coming upon him.” ⚙ Saul's career opens and closes with the same three words. Only the adjective has changed.

1 Samuel 10:6

basis: Verifier (pair check, 1 Samuel 18:10 ↔ 1 Samuel 10:6): shared H6743 tsâlach (in 64 vv), H5012 nâbâʼ (in 101 vv), H7307 rûwach (in 348 vv). A genuine three-lexeme verbal overlap, but none of the three is rare and neither text quotes the other, so the tier is held at structural — the link is an inverted narrative pattern built from shared vocabulary.

The couplet that outlived the king — and crossed the border verbal / quotation — confirmed

The women's refrain is not a one-off. It comes back twice in this book on Philistine lips: at Gath (1 Samuel 21:11) and at Aphek (1 Samuel 29:5), each time introduced as the thing that is said of David. Ellicott: “These words, which sing of the early glory of David in battle, are quoted again in 1 Samuel 29:5. They were, no doubt, the favourite refrain of an old national or folk-song.” Cambridge: it “evidently became widely current, as it was well known even among the Philistines.” ⚙ A song sung to welcome a king home became the identity card his enemies used to refuse him.

1 Samuel 21:11 · 1 Samuel 29:5

basis: Verifier: shared H7586 Shâʼûwl (in 335 vv) and H4246 mᵉchôlâh (in 8 vv — rare). Beyond the lexical overlap, both passages reproduce the refrain of 18:7 verbatim as a quotation, which Ellicott and Cambridge both record; this is an internal quotation, not merely a shared motif.

Timbrel and dance — the women's liturgy of victory structural / thematic — confirmed

The cluster תֹּף + מְחֹלָה (tôph + mᵉchôlâh) is a fixed scene in Israel's memory: Miriam and the women at the sea (Exodus 15:20) and Jephthah's daughter coming out to meet him (Judges 11:34, which also shares qârâʼ, “to meet”). Cambridge and Ellicott both cite these as the pattern; Barnes notes that “women used to dance to the sound of the timbrel, and to sing as they danced and played.” ⚙ The form carries its own freight: at the sea it crowns a deliverance no Israelite performed, and at Mizpah it greets a father who has just doomed his daughter. Placing Saul's welcome inside that form tells us the celebration is genuine and tells us nothing yet about how it will end.

Exodus 15:20 · Judges 11:34

basis: Verifier: shared H4246 mᵉchôlâh (in 8 vv) and H8596 tôph (in 16 vv); Judges 11:34 additionally shares H7122 qârâʼ (in 134 vv). Both lexemes are rare, but the link is a shared formulaic scene, not a quotation or literary dependence, so the tier is deliberately held at structural.

A dance, and an anger that burns structural / thematic — confirmed

Exodus 32:19 is the one other place in the Hebrew Bible where מְחֹלָה (dance) and חָרָה (to burn with anger) stand together: Moses comes down, sees the calf and the dancing, and his anger burns. ⚙ The grammar of the two scenes is identical and their morals are opposite. There the dance is idolatry and the burning is righteous. Here the dance is a lawful victory song and the burning is chârâh in a man who has no right to it — the Hebrew even keeps it impersonal, “it burned to Saul,” as if the rage arrived rather than being chosen. The echo indicts the angry man, not the dancers.

Exodus 32:19

basis: Verifier: shared H4246 mᵉchôlâh (in 8 vv — rare) and H2734 chârâh (in 88 vv). A real two-lexeme verbal overlap deployed in an inverted motif; no quotation or dependence is claimed in either direction.

Thousands and myriads — the pair that forced the insult verbal / quotation — confirmed

אֶלֶף // רְבָבָה is one of Hebrew poetry's standing word-pairs: the blessing on Rebekah (Genesis 24:60), the blessing on Joseph (Deuteronomy 33:17), the return of the ark (Numbers 10:36), the safety of the righteous (Psalm 91:7), and the futility of sacrifice (Micah 6:7). In every case the second, larger number is simply what the second half of the couplet requires. ⚙ This is the unit's quietest and cruellest fact: the women had to say “ten thousands” second because that is how the form works. Saul heard a verdict where the language was only finishing its sentence. Cambridge's defence stands on other grounds — “For the Philistine champion was a host in himself.”

Genesis 24:60 · Deuteronomy 33:17 · Psalm 91:7 · Micah 6:7

basis: Verifier: shared H505 ʼeleph (in 391 vv) with H7233 rᵉbâbâh (in 16 vv — rare), co-occurring in all four listed references plus Deuteronomy 32:30 and Judges 20:10. The rare second member makes this a genuine verbal link at the level of a fixed poetic word-pair; no literary dependence between 1 Samuel 18:7 and these texts is claimed.

The spear scene twice told flagged — verify source

Everything in vv. 10–11 recurs at 1 Samuel 19:9–10, there with the javelin actually entering the wall; the spear-as-sceptre beside the king's seat appears again at 1 Samuel 20:33 and 22:6. Cambridge reports that “the last sentence of 1 Samuel 18:8 and 1 Samuel 18:10–11 are not found in the Sept. (B). The narrative certainly gains by their omission.” K&D records that Thenius and others took vv. 6–14 from a different source for exactly this reason, and argues against them at length. ⚙ We record the relation and refuse to rule on it. The Verifier's only shared lexeme with 19:9 and 20:33 is the name Saul (335 verses) — that is not a verbal basis for anything, so the link here rests on the commentators' literary observation and on a contested Greek text.

1 Samuel 19:9 · 1 Samuel 20:33

basis: Verifier's only shared lexeme is H7586 Shâʼûwl (in 335 vv) — far too common to ground a verbal link. The connection is literary and text-critical: Cambridge notes 18:10–11 are absent from Septuagint (B); K&D reports Thenius's source-critical claim that 18:10–11 duplicates 19:9–10 and disputes it. Provenance contested; flagged rather than tiered.

Handed over for envy — a cross-Testament pattern structural / thematic — confirmed

⚙ The mechanism the narrator exposes here — a man acclaimed by the crowd, and the incumbent authority driven by that acclaim to seek his death — is named in so many words at the trial of Jesus: Pilate “knew that it was out of envy that they had handed Him over” (Matthew 27:18; Mark 15:10). Matthew Henry reaches for the same pattern from this end, closing his note on 18:12–30 with Hebrews 12:3: “Consider Him that endured contradiction of sinners against himself.” ⚙ We claim no verbal link and there can be none — these are Greek texts and 1 Samuel 18 is Hebrew, so no shared Strong's number exists to appeal to. What is shared is the structure of the offence: innocence plus favour, read by a threatened power as an attack.

Matthew 27:18 · Mark 15:10 · Hebrews 12:3

basis: Cross-Testament (Greek NT ↔ Hebrew OT): shared Strong's numbers are impossible by definition, so no verbal basis is or can be claimed. The recorded basis is structural — a shared narrative pattern of envy at popular acclaim producing an attempt on the favoured one's life — together with Henry's own citation of Hebrews 12:3 at this passage.

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The servant who acts wisely ancient/widely-held

The verb that frames this unit, שָׂכַל (śâkal, H7919), is the one Gill explicitly carries forward: on v. 14 he writes that David behaved himself wisely “in all his ways… in this he was a type of Christ, Isaiah 52:13.” ⚙ The typology is not built on David's virtue alone but on the structure the verb creates here: the servant acts with insight, prospers, and is precisely therefore feared and hated by the power he serves. Verse 14's participle refuses to let the prospering be a single event, and v. 15 makes the fear grow in step with it. K&D sees both halves at once: “As the hand of the Lord was visibly displayed in David's success, so, on the other hand, Saul's rejection by God was manifested in his increasing fear of David.” ⚙ The same light that shows one man to be sent shows the other to be finished.

Isaiah 52:13

The anointed under the spear ancient/widely-held

Henry sets the two figures side by side and the picture is already a gospel: “Compare David, with his harp in his hand, aiming to serve Saul, and Saul, with his javelin in his hand, aiming to slay David; and observe the sweetness and usefulness of God's persecuted people, and the barbarity of their persecutors. But David's safety must be ascribed to God's providence.” ⚙ Add Cambridge's datum that the javelin was the royal sceptre, and the tableau sharpens: the reigning king, already rejected, tries to kill the anointed successor with the emblem of the office he is losing — while the anointed one goes on doing the humble work he was hired for, “as day by day.” Henry himself draws the line to Christ two verses later, citing Hebrews 12:3 on the contradiction of sinners endured. ⚙ David is preserved through the malice, not exempted from it. So is the Son, and not through it in the same way: the spear that missed David did not miss Him.

Hebrews 12:3 · Matthew 27:18

“He must increase, but I must decrease” — in the wrong mouth novel

Maclaren puts the Baptist's words into Saul: “‘He must increase, but I must decrease,’ became Saul's bitter conviction; but instead of meekly accepting the necessity, his gloomy spirit struggled against it, like stormy waves against a breakwater, and, like them, was shivered into foam in the vain effort.” ⚙ The figure is Maclaren's own and we mark it as such — this is a preacher's application of John 3:30, not an apostolic or patristic reading of 1 Samuel 18. But it isolates something the Hebrew does support: the identical fact (a greater one has come, and my office ends) produces John's joy and Saul's spear. The difference is not information. Saul's own words in v. 8 show he had the information. The difference is whether the throne was ever regarded as one's own.

John 3:30

Apparatus & Provenance

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Text. This unit sits on top of a substantial Septuagint problem, and the commentators in the brief disagree about what follows from it. Cambridge records that the last clause of v. 8 and the whole of vv. 10–11 “are not found in the Sept. (B),” and that in Vaticanus v. 12 attaches directly to v. 8 and reads simply “and Saul was afraid of David.” Gill independently notes the Greek omission of v. 8's last clause and v. 9, “according to the Vatican copy.” Cambridge also reports that the Greek of v. 6 has the dancing women come out to meet David, not King Saul — a variant that would relocate the entire offence of v. 7. K&D reports Thenius's source-critical argument that vv. 6–14 come from a different hand and that vv. 10–11 duplicate 19:9–10, and argues against it at length. Maclaren, on literary grounds alone, holds that v. 5 “is the last verse of a section which interrupts the even flow of the story, and which is absent from the Septuagint,” and reads v. 6 as following 17:54. ⚙ We have not adjudicated any of this. The synthesis follows the Masoretic Hebrew of the Berean interlinear supplied in the brief, and the Greek evidence is recorded where it bears.

Verse 9. The word rendered “kept a jealous eye” is written עָוֹן and tagged in our interlinear as H5771 ʻâvôn, “perversity, iniquity.” K&D states the situation: it is “a denom. verb, from עין, an eye, looking askance,” used for the Qere עוֹיֵן. Every English version follows the Qere. The divergence and note record both; we do not claim to know which the author wrote.

Verse 11. Whether Saul released the spear is genuinely undecided in the sources. Ellicott reports the Alexandrian Septuagint and the Chaldee reading “lifted”; K&D and Cambridge conclude he brandished it twice without letting go; Gill and JFB read an actual throw. The strongest evidence in either direction is a silence — unlike 19:10, this text never says the spear struck the wall.

Verse 10. The Hithpael of nâbâʼ is contested in the brief itself. Pulpit and Ellicott assert the stem “is never used of real, true prophecy”; Barnes denies that “raving” is possible for the word at all. Geneva takes a third line (popular misuse of the term). We have preserved the disagreement rather than resolving it, and the exegetical claim about Niphal-versus-Hithpael usage across the canon is theirs, not a fact we verified.

Instruments. Shâlîysh (H7991, v. 6) is not securely identified. Pulpit says “triangles”; Cambridge offers triangles or three-stringed instruments; Gill records Targum and Septuagint “cymbals.” BSB's “other instruments” is a placeholder, honestly so.

Thread bases. All Hebrew-to-Hebrew bases above are the Verifier's computed shared-lexeme data, quoted with frequencies. The cross-Testament thread and the Christ readings carry no computed lexical basis and none is claimed; they are tiered structural or marked by attestation, and Gill's Isaiah 52:13 and Henry's Hebrews 12:3 are their citations, reported as such. ⚙ Everything marked with the gear is this tool's fallible synthesis and should be tested against the Hebrew and against the named voices above it.

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