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1 Samuel8:10–18

Samuel’s Warning

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1 Samuel 8:10–18 — Samuel’s Warning. Each verse below carries the full apparatus: the Berean Standard Bible, the vocalized original (tap any word), and a parsed breakdown of every term transcribed from the interlinear. Synthesized commentary, canonical threads, and the reading of Christ gather at the end, over the whole unit.

10“So Samuel spoke all the words of the LORD to the people who were…”+

10So Samuel spoke all the words of the LORD to the people who were asking him for a king.

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Hebrew — tap a word ↓

šə·mū·’êl ’êṯ way·yō·mer kāl- diḇ·rê Yah·weh ’el- hā·‘ām haš·šō·’ă·lîm mê·’it·tōw me·leḵ

Literal — word-for-word from the original

And-he-said, Samuel, all the-words of-YHWH unto the-people, the-ones-asking from-with-him a-king.

Where the English smooths the original

  • הַשֹּׁאֲלִ֥ים הַשֹּׁאֲלִים (haš·šō·’ă·lîm, H7592 shâʼal, Qal participle masculine plural with the article) is not the past tense the English gives (“who were asking”) but a standing description: the askers. The participle makes the demand their identity, not an episode. ⚙ It is also the verb from which the name Saul (Shaʼul, “asked for”) is formed — the man they get will be named for what they did.
  • דִּבְרֵ֣י כָּל־דִּבְרֵי יְהוָה (kāl-diḇ·rê Yah·weh, H3605 + H1697) — “all the words of YHWH,” a construct chain. K&D reads it as the whole of 8:7–9 delivered without subtraction; the English “all the words of the LORD” keeps the sense but loses that kōl stands first and governs, making completeness the point of the sentence.
  • מֵאִתּ֖וֹ מֵאִתּוֹ (mê·’it·tōw, H854 with prefixed min) — literally “from with him,” the preposition of nearness turned into a preposition of extraction. BSB renders it as nothing at all (“asking him for”). The Hebrew says they were drawing something out of the man who stood nearest to God.
  • וַיֹּ֣אמֶר וַיֹּאמֶר (way·yō·mer, H559, Qal consecutive imperfect) — the plain narrative “and he said.” BSB's “spoke” imports a formality the verb does not carry; ʼâmar is the ordinary verb of speech, and Samuel simply repeats what he was given.
Word by word11 · parsed+
שְׁמוּאֵ֔לšə·mū·’êlSo SamuelH8050
√ Shᵉmûwʼêl — Shemuel, the name of three IsraelitesNounpropermasculine singular
אֵ֖ת’êṯH853
√ ʼêth — properly, self (but generally used to point out more definitely the object of a verb or preposition, even or namely)Direct object marker
וַיֹּ֣אמֶרway·yō·merspokeH559
√ ʼâmar — to say (used with great latitude)Conjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine singular
ʼâmar — to say (Qal consecutive imperfect) The commonest verb in the Hebrew Bible, used here with no prophetic formula attached. Samuel adds nothing of his own; the weight of the verse sits on its object, all the words of YHWH.
כָּל־kāl-allH3605
√ kôl — properly, the wholeNounmasculine singular construct
דִּבְרֵ֣יdiḇ·rêthe wordsH1697
√ dâbâr — a wordNounmasculine plural construct
dâbâr — word, matter, thing In construct with kōl. The same noun covers both “word” and “affair,” so “all the words of YHWH” means the entire transaction as God stated it, warning included. K&D ties the phrase directly back to what God said in 8:7–9.
יְהוָ֑הYah·wehof the LORDH3068
√ Yᵉhôvâh — Jehovah, Jewish national name of GodNounpropermasculine singular
אֶל־’el-toH413
√ ʼêl — near, with or amongPreposition
הָעָ֕םhā·‘āmthe peopleH5971
√ ʻam — a people (as a congregated unit)ArticleNounmasculine singular
הַשֹּׁאֲלִ֥יםhaš·šō·’ă·lîmwho were asking him forH7592
√ shâʼal — to inquireArticleVerbQalParticiplemasculine plural
shâʼal — to inquire, ask, request A participle, and therefore a name for what these people are. Cambridge notes the people here are acting “through their representatives the elders,” so the asking is formal and corporate, not a crowd's murmur. Gill insists the phrase distinguishes no minority: it was “an united request.”
מֵאִתּ֖וֹmê·’it·tōw. . .H854
√ ʼêth — properly, nearness (used only as a preposition or an adverb), nearPreposition-mDirect object markerthird person masculine singular
מֶֽלֶךְ׃סme·leḵa kingH4428
√ melek — a kingNounmasculine singular
melek — king The last word of the verse, and grammatically bare: no article, no qualifier. They have not asked for this king or a righteous king; they have asked for the institution itself, and the next nine verses answer by describing the institution itself.
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In accordance with the instructions of God, Samuel told the people all the words of Jehovah, i.e., all that God had said to him, as related in 1 Samuel 8:7-9 , and then proclaimed to them the right of the king.
The rights of a king 10 . unto the people ] Through their representatives the elders.
Cambridge titles 10–18 “the rights of a king,” which is the translation question the whole speech turns on: is mishpat a legal entitlement or a description of behaviour? Geneva (at v. 11) denies it is an entitlement.
that asked of him a king; which is observed, not to distinguish a part of them from the rest; for this was an united request of the people.
11“He said, “This will be the manner of the king who will reign ove…”+

11He said, “This will be the manner of the king who will reign over you: He will take your sons and appoint them to serve his own chariots and horses, and to run in front of his chariots.

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Hebrew — tap a word ↓

way·yō·mer zeh yih·yeh miš·paṭ ham·me·leḵ ’ă·šer yim·lōḵ ‘ă·lê·ḵem ’eṯ- yiq·qāḥ bə·nê·ḵem wə·śām lōw bə·mer·kaḇ·tōw ū·ḇə·p̄ā·rā·šāw wə·rā·ṣū lip̄·nê mer·kaḇ·tōw

Literal — word-for-word from the original

And-he-said: This will-be the-mishpat of-the-king who will-reign over-you: your-sons he-will-take, and-he-will-set for-himself in-his-chariot and-on-his-horses, and-they-shall-run before his-chariot.

Where the English smooths the original

  • מִשְׁפַּ֣ט מִשְׁפַּט (miš·paṭ, H4941) is the courtroom word — “a verdict pronounced judicially… including the act, the place, the suit, the crime, and the penalty.” BSB's “manner” is a deliberate softening. Cambridge offers “the right of the king; such prerogatives as an absolute monarch claims”; Geneva flatly denies that kings hold it “by their office”; Pulpit says it means “not so much the legal right itself, as the way in which that right was exercised.” The English cannot hold all three senses at once, and the Hebrew word is exactly what is in dispute.
  • יִקָּ֗ח יִקָּח (yiq·qāḥ, H3947 lâqach, Qal imperfect) — “he will take.” Poole: “to wit, injuriously and by violence, as this Hebrew word is oft used.” The verb governs this entire speech (vv. 11, 13, 14, 16), and the English scatters it across four sentences, hiding that one verb is being hammered five times.
  • בְּמֶרְכַּבְתּ֣וֹ בְּמֶרְכַּבְתּוֹ (bə·mer·kaḇ·tōw, H4818 merkâbâh) is singular with a singular suffix, both here and at the verse's end. BSB pluralises to “his own chariots” and “his chariots.” K&D refuses the emendation: “the word refers, not to war-chariots, but to the king's state-carriage.” Pulpit agrees — the verse is about royal display, not warfare.
  • וּבְפָרָשָׁ֔יו וּבְפָרָשָׁיו (ū·ḇə·p̄ā·rā·šāw, H6571 pârâsh) — BSB “and horses.” The lexicon defines pârâsh as “a steed (as stretched out to a vehicle, not single nor for mounting).” K&D says it “does not mean a rider, but a saddle-horse”; Pulpit translates “upon his horses.” The preposition is bə- (“on/in”), so the sons are placed on the equipment: the men become part of the fittings.
Word by word18 · parsed+
וַיֹּ֕אמֶרway·yō·merHe saidH559
√ ʼâmar — to say (used with great latitude)Conjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine singular
זֶ֗הzehThisH2088
√ zeh — the masculine demonstrative pronoun, this or thatPronounmasculine singular
יִֽהְיֶה֙yih·yehwill beH1961
√ hâyâh — to exist, iVerbQalImperfectthird person masculine singular
מִשְׁפַּ֣טmiš·paṭthe mannerH4941
√ mishpâṭ — properly, a verdict (favorable or unfavorable) pronounced judicially, especially a sentence or formal decree (human or (participant's) divine law, individual or collective), including the act, the place, the suit, the crime, and the penaltyNounmasculine singular construct
mishpâṭ — verdict, judgment, legal custom The pivot of the unit. Everywhere else in Samuel this noun names what is owed; here it names what will be done. Geneva's gloss protects the distinction: kings do not hold this authority by office, “but that such as reign in God's wrath would usurp this over their brethren, contrary to the law, De 17:20.” Benson makes the same move grammatically, noting Samuel does not say “the manner of a king” but “of the king that shall reign over you.”
הַמֶּ֔לֶךְham·me·leḵof the kingH4428
√ melek — a kingArticleNounmasculine singular
אֲשֶׁ֥ר’ă·šerwhoH834
√ ʼăsher — who, which, what, thatPronounrelative
יִמְלֹ֖ךְyim·lōḵwill reignH4427
√ mâlak — to reignVerbQalImperfectthird person masculine singular
mâlak — to reign Qal imperfect, from the same root as melek. The cognate pairing (“the king who will king it over you”) is untranslatable into English and carries a note of inevitability: the office will act like itself.
עֲלֵיכֶ֑ם‘ă·lê·ḵemover youH5921
√ ʻal — above, over, upon, or against (yet always in this last relation with a downward aspect) in a great variety of applicationsPrepositionsecond person masculine plural
אֶת־’eṯ-H853
√ ʼêth — properly, self (but generally used to point out more definitely the object of a verb or preposition, even or namely)Direct object marker
יִקָּ֗חyiq·qāḥHe will takeH3947
√ lâqach — to take (in the widest variety of applications)VerbQalImperfectthird person masculine singular
lâqach — to take (Qal imperfect) The unit's governing verb. Poole marks it as a verb of seizure rather than acquisition — otherwise, he reasons, “the king would have no more privilege than any of his subjects; for any man might take a son with his own or parents' consent.” The whole speech is a catalogue of what one verb will do to a household.
בְּנֵיכֶ֣םbə·nê·ḵemyour sonsH1121
√ bên — a son (as a builder of the family name), in the widest sense (of literal and figurative relationship, including grandson, subject, nation, quality or condition, etcNounmasculine plural constructsecond person masculine plural
וְשָׂ֥םwə·śāmand appoint [them]H7760
√ sûwm — to put (used in a great variety of applications, literal, figurative, inferentially, and elliptically)Conjunctive wawVerbQalConjunctive perfectthird person masculine singular
sûwm — to put, set, appoint A conjunctive perfect carrying forward the imperfect's future force. The same verb recurs at 8:12 (wə·lā·śūm). Note the reflexive dative that follows it: lōw, “for himself.” Every placement in this speech terminates in the king's own benefit.
לוֹ֙lōwto serve
Prepositionthird person masculine singular
בְּמֶרְכַּבְתּ֣וֹbə·mer·kaḇ·tōwhis own chariotsH4818
√ merkâbâh — a chariotPreposition-bNounfeminine singular constructthird person masculine singular
וּבְפָרָשָׁ֔יוū·ḇə·p̄ā·rā·šāwand horsesH6571
√ pârâsh — a steed (as stretched out to a vehicle, not single nor for mounting )Conjunctive waw, Preposition-bNounmasculine plural constructthird person masculine singular
וְרָצ֖וּwə·rā·ṣūand to runH7323
√ rûwts — to run (for whatever reason, especially to rush)Conjunctive wawVerbQalConjunctive perfectthird person common plural
rûwts — to run, to rush JFB: royal equipages “were, generally throughout the East… preceded and accompanied by a number of attendants who ran on foot.” Cambridge adds that “a body of runners was a regular sign of regal state.” The sons of Israel are not given a task here; they are given a function in a display.
לִפְנֵ֥יlip̄·nêin front ofH6440
√ pânîym — the face (as the part that turns)Preposition-lNouncommon plural construct
מֶרְכַּבְתּֽוֹ׃mer·kaḇ·tōwhis chariotsH4818
√ merkâbâh — a chariotNounfeminine singular constructthird person masculine singular
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Were they willing to exchange their Republican freedom for the condition of subjection to a sovereign who, after the manner of those other kings of foreign nations—the Pharaohs, for instance—would of course govern Israel after his own will? in other words, were they really willing to give up their Republic for a Despotism?
Ellicott's "Republic" is a Victorian political category laid over a theocracy; the Hebrew text speaks of God as King, not of a republic. The rhetorical force is his, the constitutional vocabulary is not the text's.
Not that kings have this authority by their office, but that such as reign in God's wrath would usurp this over their brethren, contrary to the law, De 17:20.
He will take your sons, to wit, injuriously and by violence, as this Hebrew word is oft used, as Genesis 20:3 27:36 Job 5:5 ; and so it must be here;
12“He will appoint some for himself as commanders of thousands and …”+

12He will appoint some for himself as commanders of thousands and of fifties, and others to plow his ground, to reap his harvest, and to make his weapons of war and equipment for his chariots.

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Hebrew — tap a word ↓

wə·lā·śūm lōw śā·rê ’ă·lā·p̄îm wə·śā·rê ḥă·miš·šîm wə·la·ḥă·rōš ḥă·rî·šōw wə·liq·ṣōr qə·ṣî·rōw wə·la·‘ă·śō·wṯ kə·lê- mil·ḥam·tōw ū·ḵə·lê riḵ·bōw

Literal — word-for-word from the original

And-to-set for-himself chiefs-of thousands and-chiefs-of fifties; and-to-plow his-plowing and-to-reap his-harvest, and-to-make his-weapons-of war and-the-gear-of his-chariotry.

Where the English smooths the original

  • וְלָשׂ֣וּם וְלָשׂוּם (wə·lā·śūm, H7760, Qal infinitive construct with lə-) — not a new independent sentence as in BSB (“He will appoint”) but a purpose-infinitive still hanging on yiqqāḥ, “he will take.” K&D states it exactly: “ולשׂוּם is also dependent upon יקּח.” Every task in this verse is still an act of taking.
  • חֲרִישׁוֹ֙ חֲרִישׁוֹ (ḥă·rî·šōw, H2758 chârîysh, “ploughing or its season”) — BSB flattens the cognate to “his ground.” Barnes renders the Hebrew idiom literally: “to plow his plowing.” K&D glosses it “his field (חרישׁ, lit. the ploughed).” The noun is rare (3 verses in the canon) and can mean the season as well as the land — which is the sting Pulpit presses: the conscription falls precisely when a farmer's own field needs him.
  • שָׂרֵ֥י שָׂרֵי אֲלָפִים (śā·rê ’ă·lā·p̄îm, H8269 + H505) — “chiefs of thousands.” Sar is simply “a head person of any rank,” not specifically military; BSB's “commanders” narrows it. Cambridge records that the Septuagint reads hundreds and thousands, and defends the Hebrew as naming “the highest and the lowest offices” — i.e. the whole ladder, not two rungs.
  • כְּלֵֽי־ כְּלֵי־מִלְחַמְתּוֹ וּכְלֵי רִכְבּוֹ (kə·lê, H3627) — one noun used twice. Kᵉlîy means “something prepared,” an implement of any sort; BSB splits it into “weapons” and “equipment.” The Hebrew repeats a single word, so the line reads as one inventory: the gear of his war, the gear of his chariotry.
Word by word15 · parsed+
וְלָשׂ֣וּםwə·lā·śūmHe will appointH7760
√ sûwm — to put (used in a great variety of applications, literal, figurative, inferentially, and elliptically)Conjunctive waw, Preposition-lVerbQalInfinitive construct
ל֔וֹlōwsome for himself
Prepositionthird person masculine singular
שָׂרֵ֥יśā·rêas commandersH8269
√ sar — a head person (of any rank or class)Nounmasculine plural construct
sar — a head person of any rank or class Benson concedes the promotion looks like advancement and then dismantles it: the honour is held at another man's pleasure and “placed or displaced as he thinks fit.” Barnes notes the structure itself is ancient, as old as Moses (Numbers 31:14; Deuteronomy 1:15) and shared with the Philistines — so the grievance is not organisation but ownership.
אֲלָפִ֖ים’ă·lā·p̄îmof thousandsH505
√ ʼeleph — hence (the ox's head being the first letter of the alphabet, and this eventually used as a numeral) a thousandNumbermasculine plural
וְשָׂרֵ֣יwə·śā·rêand ofH8269
√ sar — a head person (of any rank or class)Conjunctive wawNounmasculine plural construct
חֲמִשִּׁ֑יםḥă·miš·šîmfiftiesH2572
√ chămishshîym — fiftyNumbercommon plural
וְלַחֲרֹ֤שׁwə·la·ḥă·rōšand others to plowH2790
√ chârash — to scratch, iConjunctive waw, Preposition-lVerbQalInfinitive construct
chârash — to scratch, to plough, to engrave Qal infinitive construct. The verb's basic sense is cutting into a surface, whether soil, metal or wood; the same root stands behind the craftsman as behind the ploughman, which is why this one verse can move from field to arsenal without changing register.
חֲרִישׁוֹ֙ḥă·rî·šōwhis groundH2758
√ chârîysh — ploughing or its seasonNounmasculine singular constructthird person masculine singular
chârîysh — ploughing, or its season A rare noun (3 verses). Because it can name the time of ploughing, the conscription described here is a theft of the agricultural calendar, not merely of labour. Pulpit calls forced labour “the chief cause of the revolt of the ten tribes from Rehoboam,” and cites Jeremiah's charge against Jehoiakim that “he used his neighbour's service without wages.”
וְלִקְצֹ֣רwə·liq·ṣōrto reapH7114
√ qâtsar — to dock off, iConjunctive waw, Preposition-lVerbQalInfinitive construct
קְצִיר֔וֹqə·ṣî·rōwhis harvestH7105
√ qâtsîyr — severed, iNounmasculine singular constructthird person masculine singular
וְלַעֲשׂ֥וֹתwə·la·‘ă·śō·wṯand to makeH6213
√ ʻâsâh — to do or make, in the broadest sense and widest applicationConjunctive waw, Preposition-lVerbQalInfinitive construct
כְּלֵֽי־kə·lê-his weaponsH3627
√ kᵉlîy — something prepared, iNounmasculine plural construct
kᵉlîy — an implement, vessel, something prepared The word covers temple vessels, farm tools and war gear alike. Its double use here quietly converts the household's craftsmen into an arsenal: the same hands that made vessels for a home will make vessels for a chariot corps.
מִלְחַמְתּ֖וֹmil·ḥam·tōwof warH4421
√ milchâmâh — a battle (iNounfeminine singular constructthird person masculine singular
וּכְלֵ֥יū·ḵə·lêand equipmentH3627
√ kᵉlîy — something prepared, iConjunctive wawNounmasculine plural construct
רִכְבּֽוֹ׃riḵ·bōwfor his chariotsH7393
√ rekeb — a vehicleNounmasculine singular constructthird person masculine singular
rekeb — a vehicle, chariotry Distinct from merkâbâh in v. 11 (the state-carriage); rekeb is the collective war machine. Gill takes the “instruments of chariots” as the iron scythes fitted to them. The verse therefore ends where a peasant economy least wants to be: supplying a standing armoured force.
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Forced labour was one of the most unjust, oppressive, and wasteful exactions of absolute governments, and was the chief cause of the revolt of the ten tribes from Rehoboam
And though this might seem to be no disadvantage, but an honour to the persons so advanced; yet even in them that honour was accompanied with great dangers, and pernicious snares of many kinds, for which those faint shadows of glory could not recompense them
This organization was as old as the time of Moses Numbers 31:14 ; Deuteronomy 1:15 , and prevailed among the Philistines also
Barnes is answering a question the text does not raise — whether the ranks themselves are an innovation. His answer (they are Mosaic) sharpens Samuel's point: the novelty is not the structure but who owns its output.
13“And he will take your daughters to be perfumers, cooks, and bake…”+

13And he will take your daughters to be perfumers, cooks, and bakers.

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wə·’eṯ- yiq·qāḥ bə·nō·w·ṯê·ḵem lə·raq·qā·ḥō·wṯ ū·lə·ṭab·bā·ḥō·wṯ ū·lə·’ō·p̄ō·wṯ

Literal — word-for-word from the original

And-your-daughters he-will-take for-perfumers and-for-cooks and-for-bakers.

Where the English smooths the original

  • יִקָּ֑ח יִקָּח (yiq·qāḥ, H3947) — the same seizing verb as v. 11, now with daughters as its object. BSB's “And he will take” is accurate; what the English cannot show is that the object stands first in the Hebrew clause (wə-’eṯ bə·nō·w·ṯê·ḵem), so the daughters are placed before the verb that will carry them off.
  • לְרַקָּח֥וֹת לְרַקָּחוֹת (lə·raq·qā·ḥō·wṯ, H7548 raqqâchâh, “a female perfumer”) — BSB “perfumers,” the older versions “confectionaries.” Cambridge explains the archaism: “confectioner… = one who makes confections (Exodus 30:35), i.e. compounds of spices and perfumes, a perfumer.” K&D renders “preparers of ointments.” The noun is feminine by form, so the trade and the gender are fused in the word itself.
  • וּלְאֹפֽוֹת׃ וּלְאֹפוֹת (ū·lə·’ō·p̄ō·wṯ, H644 ʼâphâh) — parsed not as a noun but as a Qal participle, feminine plural: “ones baking.” BSB's noun “bakers” makes it a job title; the Hebrew leaves it a live action, the last of three lə- phrases naming what the daughters will be for.
  • בְּנוֹתֵיכֶ֖ם בְּנוֹתֵיכֶם (bə·nō·w·ṯê·ḵem, H1323 bath) — “your daughters,” construct with a 2mp suffix, deliberately paired with bᵉnêḵem (“your sons,” H1121) in v. 11. The English separates the two verses by two sentences; the Hebrew sets sons and daughters as the matched halves of one confiscation.
Word by word6 · parsed+
וְאֶת־wə·’eṯ-AndH853
√ ʼêth — properly, self (but generally used to point out more definitely the object of a verb or preposition, even or namely)Conjunctive wawDirect object marker
יִקָּ֑חyiq·qāḥhe will takeH3947
√ lâqach — to take (in the widest variety of applications)VerbQalImperfectthird person masculine singular
lâqach — to take Third occurrence of the verb in three verses. Benson presses the difference in kind: the king “will exercise as arbitrary a power over the women as over the men… either for nothing, or such wages as he shall please to give them.”
בְּנוֹתֵיכֶ֖םbə·nō·w·ṯê·ḵemyour daughtersH1323
√ bath — a daughter (used in the same wide sense as other terms of relationship, literally and figuratively)Nounfeminine plural constructsecond person masculine plural
לְרַקָּח֥וֹתlə·raq·qā·ḥō·wṯ[to be] perfumersH7548
√ raqqâchâh — a female perfumerPreposition-lNounfeminine plural
raqqâchâh — a female perfumer The trade belongs to the sanctuary vocabulary: the compounding of spices in Exodus 30:35 is priestly work. ⚙ The skill that once served the holy anointing oil is here requisitioned for a court's private luxury — a small displacement that mirrors the large one, worship redirected to a throne.
וּלְטַבָּח֖וֹתū·lə·ṭab·bā·ḥō·wṯcooksH2879
√ ṭabbâchâh — a female cookConjunctive waw, Preposition-lNounfeminine plural
וּלְאֹפֽוֹת׃ū·lə·’ō·p̄ō·wṯand bakersH644
√ ʼâphâh — to cook, especially to bakeConjunctive waw, Preposition-lVerbQalParticiplefeminine plural
ʼâphâh — to bake (Qal participle, feminine plural) Gill observes that baking, women's work in the East, is men's work in his own England, and warns against reading the verse through a European household. Pulpit notices what Samuel leaves unsaid: he “does not mention the far worse use to which Solomon put their daughters.” The warning is restrained; history was not.
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Cookery, baking, and the kindred works are, in Eastern countries, female employment, and thousands of young women are occupied with these offices in the palaces even of petty princes.
It is remarkable that Samuel does not mention the far worse use to which Solomon put their daughters
To have their daughters taken in this manner would be peculiarly grievous to the parents, and dangerous to themselves, because of the tenderness of their sex
14“He will take the best of your fields and vineyards and olive gro…”+

14He will take the best of your fields and vineyards and olive groves and give them to his servants.

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wə·’e·ṯś- yiq·qāḥ haṭ·ṭō·w·ḇîm śə·d̲ô·t̲ê·k̲em wə·’eṯ- kar·mê·ḵem wə·zê·ṯê·ḵem wə·nā·ṯan la·‘ă·ḇā·ḏāw

Literal — word-for-word from the original

And-your-fields and-your-vineyards and-your-olive-groves, the-good-ones, he-will-take, and-he-will-give to-his-servants.

Where the English smooths the original

  • הַטּוֹבִ֖ים הַטּוֹבִים (haṭ·ṭō·w·ḇîm, H2896 ṭôwb, article + adjective, masculine plural) — BSB “the best.” The Hebrew is the plain adjective “good” with the article, a superlative only by idiom; K&D glosses “the good (i.e., the best).” It is the same word by which creation is pronounced good, now used to mark which parcels get confiscated first.
  • וְנָתַ֖ן וְנָתַן (wə·nā·ṯan, H5414 nâthan, conjunctive perfect) — “and he will give.” This is the first verb of giving in the speech, and it faces the wrong way: the king gives, but never to them. Poole draws the line: “He will not only take the fruits of your lands for his own use, but will take away your possessions to give to his servants.”
  • לַעֲבָדָֽיו׃ לַעֲבָדָיו (la·‘ă·ḇā·ḏāw, H5650 ʻebed) — “to his servants.” BSB is right, but the English hides the sentence the unit is building toward: the same noun will be the people's own title at v. 17. The land passes from Israel to the king's ʻăbādîm, and then Israel becomes ʻăbādîm too.
  • כַּרְמֵיכֶ֧ם כַּרְמֵיכֶם וְזֵיתֵיכֶם (kar·mê·ḵem wə·zê·ṯê·ḵem, H3754 + H2132) — vineyard and olive, the two slow crops. BSB adds “groves” for the olives; the Hebrew is simply “your olives.” These are plantings that take a generation to bear, which is why their seizure is not a tax but the loss of inherited work.
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וְאֶת־wə·’e·ṯś-H853
√ ʼêth — properly, self (but generally used to point out more definitely the object of a verb or preposition, even or namely)Conjunctive wawDirect object marker
יִקָּ֑חyiq·qāḥHe will takeH3947
√ lâqach — to take (in the widest variety of applications)VerbQalImperfectthird person masculine singular
הַטּוֹבִ֖יםhaṭ·ṭō·w·ḇîmthe bestH2896
√ ṭôwb — good (as an adjective) in the widest senseArticleAdjectivemasculine plural
ṭôwb — good, in the widest sense Placed after the three nouns it selects. Gill restricts the seizure to produce rather than title, arguing that “otherwise Ahab would have taken away Naboth's vineyard at once”; Pulpit and Poole read the same Naboth story the other way, as proof of arbitrary seizure attempted. ⚙ The text itself only says he will take, and Samuel is describing a despotism, not drafting a statute.
שְׂ֠דֽוֹתֵיכֶםśə·d̲ô·t̲ê·k̲emof your fieldsH7704
√ sâdeh — a field (as flat)Nounmasculine plural constructsecond person masculine plural
וְאֶת־wə·’eṯ-andH853
√ ʼêth — properly, self (but generally used to point out more definitely the object of a verb or preposition, even or namely)Conjunctive wawDirect object marker
כַּרְמֵיכֶ֧םkar·mê·ḵemvineyardsH3754
√ kerem — a garden or vineyardNounmasculine plural constructsecond person masculine plural
וְזֵיתֵיכֶ֛םwə·zê·ṯê·ḵemand olive grovesH2132
√ zayith — an olive (as yielding illuminating oil), the tree, the branch or the berryConjunctive wawNounmasculine plural constructsecond person masculine plural
וְנָתַ֖ןwə·nā·ṯanand give themH5414
√ nâthan — to give, used with greatest latitude of application (put, make, etcConjunctive wawVerbQalConjunctive perfectthird person masculine singular
nâthan — to give, put, make The counterweight to lâqach. Together the two verbs form the economy of the whole speech: take from the many, give to the few. Israel's land was itself a gift (Joshua 24:13 uses the same picture of vineyards and olives they did not plant); the king reverses the direction of the giving.
לַעֲבָדָֽיו׃la·‘ă·ḇā·ḏāwto his servantsH5650
√ ʻebed — a servantPreposition-lNounmasculine plural constructthird person masculine singular
ʻebed — a servant, a slave Court servants here, and it is worth marking that ʻebed covers both a royal minister and a chattel slave. The unit exploits the range: the word is honourable in v. 14 and crushing in v. 17, and nothing changes but who it is applied to.
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He will take your fields, to wit, by fraud or force, as Ahab did from Naboth.
for otherwise kings might not, and did not by their absolute authority, take away those from their subjects; otherwise Ahab would have taken away Naboth's vineyard at once
Gill and Pulpit read the Naboth episode in opposite directions from the same facts — Gill as proof that kings could not simply seize land, Pulpit as proof of the despotic intent. The verse settles neither; both readings are printed here on purpose.
The history of the seizure of Naboth's vineyard shows that the kings were not able to exercise this arbitrary power.
15“He will take a tenth of your grain and grape harvest and give it…”+

15He will take a tenth of your grain and grape harvest and give it to his officials and servants.

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ya‘·śōr wə·zar·‘ê·ḵem wə·ḵar·mê·ḵem wə·nā·ṯan lə·sā·rî·sāw wə·la·‘ă·ḇā·ḏāw

Literal — word-for-word from the original

And-your-seed and-your-vineyards he-will-tithe, and-he-will-give to-his-eunuchs and-to-his-servants.

Where the English smooths the original

  • יַעְשֹׂ֑ר יַעְשֹׂר (ya‘·śōr, H6237 ʻâsar, Qal imperfect) — one verb, “he will tithe,” which BSB must expand into the phrase “will take a tenth of.” The loss matters: ʻâsar is a rare verb (8 verses in the canon) and every other occurrence concerns the tenth owed to God. Samuel is not describing taxation in the abstract; he is describing a rival tithe.
  • לְסָרִיסָ֖יו לְסָרִיסָיו (lə·sā·rî·sāw, H5631 çârîyç) — BSB “to his officials.” The word is literally eunuch. K&D allows the wider sense (“here it is used in a wider sense for the royal chamberlains”); Poole insists on the literal, “which may imply a further injury, that he should, against the command of God, make some of his people eunuchs.” Pulpit is blunter still. The English “officials” erases an accusation the Hebrew may be making.
  • וְזַרְעֵיכֶ֥ם וְזַרְעֵיכֶם (wə·zar·‘ê·ḵem, H2233 zeraʻ) — “your seed,” not “your grain.” Zeraʻ is the sown thing and, elsewhere, offspring. BSB's “grain harvest” is the right sense here, but the noun's other range — descendants — sits uneasily beside a speech that has already taken the sons and daughters.
  • וְנָתַ֥ן וְנָתַן (wə·nā·ṯan, H5414) — repeated from v. 14 with the same shape: take, then give elsewhere. BSB varies the English (“give them” / “give it”), which hides that the clause is a refrain rather than a new statement.
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יַעְשֹׂ֑רya‘·śōrHe will take a tenthH6237
√ ʻâsar — to tithe, iVerbQalImperfectthird person masculine singular
ʻâsar — to tithe, to take the tenth A rare verb (8 verses). Its home is covenant: Jacob's vow at Bethel, the Deuteronomic tithe laws, Nehemiah's restored tithes. Poole names the collision precisely: “besides the several tenths which God hath reserved for his service and servants, he will, when he pleaseth, impose another tenth upon you.” Pulpit puts it in one line — the king will cost as much as the whole worship of God.
וְזַרְעֵיכֶ֥םwə·zar·‘ê·ḵemof your grainH2233
√ zeraʻ — seedConjunctive wawNounmasculine plural constructsecond person masculine plural
וְכַרְמֵיכֶ֖םwə·ḵar·mê·ḵemand grape harvestH3754
√ kerem — a garden or vineyardConjunctive wawNounmasculine plural constructsecond person masculine plural
וְנָתַ֥ןwə·nā·ṯanand give itH5414
√ nâthan — to give, used with greatest latitude of application (put, make, etcConjunctive wawVerbQalConjunctive perfectthird person masculine singular
לְסָרִיסָ֖יוlə·sā·rî·sāwto his officialsH5631
√ çârîyç — a eunuchPreposition-lNounmasculine plural constructthird person masculine singular
çârîyç — a eunuch; by extension, a court official The ambiguity is real and old. Gill documents the tenth as a standard ancient royal revenue (citing Aristotle on Babylon), which keeps the exaction from looking uniquely monstrous; Poole and Pulpit read the word literally and find in it a further, bodily cruelty. ⚙ The lexicon supports both; the unit records both rather than choosing.
וְלַעֲבָדָֽיו׃wə·la·‘ă·ḇā·ḏāwand servantsH5650
√ ʻebed — a servantConjunctive waw, Preposition-lNounmasculine plural constructthird person masculine singular
ʻebed — a servant Paired with çârîyç as the two classes fed by the tithe, and the second of three occurrences of this noun in four verses (8:14, 8:15, 8:17). K&D tracks the movement: the best land goes to the king's servants, the tithe feeds his courtiers and servants, and at last “the king would make all the people into his servants or slaves.” ⚙ The word does not change meaning between v. 15 and v. 17; only the people it is applied to changes, which is the entire argument of the speech compressed into one noun.
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The tenth. i.e. the king will cost you as much as all the ordinances of religion.
besides the several tenths which God hath reserved for his service and servants, he will, when he pleaseth, impose another tenth upon you.
In Babylon, as Aristotle (g) relates, there was an ancient law which required the tenth of whatever was imported for the public revenue
Gill's classical parallels (Aristotle, Diodorus) are cited from eighteenth-century editions and are historical illustration, not exegesis; they show the tenth was an ordinary royal rate in the ancient world, which is exactly why Samuel's hearers would not have flinched at it.
lit. the eunuch; here it is used in a wider sense for the royal chamberlains.
16“And he will take your menservants and maidservants and your best…”+

16And he will take your menservants and maidservants and your best cattle and donkeys and put them to his own use.

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wə·’eṯ- yiq·qāḥ ‘aḇ·ḏê·ḵem wə·’eṯ- šip̄·ḥō·w·ṯê·ḵem wə·’eṯ- haṭ·ṭō·w·ḇîm wə·’eṯ- ba·ḥū·rê·ḵem ḥă·mō·w·rê·ḵem wə·‘ā·śāh lim·laḵ·tōw

Literal — word-for-word from the original

And-your-menservants and-your-maidservants and-your-choice-young-men and-your-donkeys he-will-take, and-he-will-make for-his-work.

Where the English smooths the original

  • בַּחוּרֵיכֶ֧ם בַּחוּרֵיכֶם (ba·ḥū·rê·ḵem, H970 bâchûwr, “properly, selected”) — BSB renders “your best cattle,” following the Septuagint's τὰ βουκόλια, which presupposes בּקריכם (“your oxen”). The Hebrew text as transmitted says “your choice young men.” K&D calls the word “very striking and altogether unsuitable” here and judges it an ancient copyist's error; Ellicott, Cambridge and Pulpit agree. ⚙ This is the one place in the unit where the printed English is not translating the Hebrew in front of it, and the reader should know that.
  • וְעָשָׂ֖ה וְעָשָׂה לִמְלַאכְתּוֹ (wə·‘ā·śāh, H6213 ʻâsâh) — literally “and he will do [them] for his work,” a verb of making applied to persons and animals alike. BSB's “put them to his own use” is smoother and colder; the Hebrew uses the verb of craftsmanship, as though people were material.
  • לִמְלַאכְתּֽוֹ׃ לִמְלַאכְתּוֹ (lim·laḵ·tōw, H4399 mᵉlâʼkâh, “properly, deputyship… work, business”) — the noun shares a root with malʼak, messenger. BSB “his own use.” The Hebrew names a standing enterprise: not an occasional errand but the king's permanent business, into which the household's whole labour force is absorbed.
  • שִׁפְח֨וֹתֵיכֶ֜ם עַבְדֵיכֶם … שִׁפְחוֹתֵיכֶם (‘aḇ·ḏê·ḵem … šip̄·ḥō·w·ṯê·ḵem, H5650 + H8198) — “your male slaves and your female slaves.” BSB's “menservants and maidservants” is decorous; shiphchâh is “a female slave as a member of the household.” The point of the line is that even what Israel owns is not theirs.
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וְאֶת־wə·’eṯ-AndH853
√ ʼêth — properly, self (but generally used to point out more definitely the object of a verb or preposition, even or namely)Conjunctive wawDirect object marker
יִקָּ֑חyiq·qāḥhe will takeH3947
√ lâqach — to take (in the widest variety of applications)VerbQalImperfectthird person masculine singular
עַבְדֵיכֶם֩‘aḇ·ḏê·ḵemyour menservantsH5650
√ ʻebed — a servantNounmasculine plural constructsecond person masculine plural
וְֽאֶת־wə·’eṯ-andH853
√ ʼêth — properly, self (but generally used to point out more definitely the object of a verb or preposition, even or namely)Conjunctive wawDirect object marker
שִׁפְח֨וֹתֵיכֶ֜םšip̄·ḥō·w·ṯê·ḵemmaidservantsH8198
√ shiphchâh — a female slave (as a member of the household)Nounfeminine plural constructsecond person masculine plural
וְאֶת־wə·’eṯ-andH853
√ ʼêth — properly, self (but generally used to point out more definitely the object of a verb or preposition, even or namely)Conjunctive wawDirect object marker
הַטּוֹבִ֛יםhaṭ·ṭō·w·ḇîmyour bestH2896
√ ṭôwb — good (as an adjective) in the widest senseArticleAdjectivemasculine plural
וְאֶת־wə·’eṯ-H853
√ ʼêth — properly, self (but generally used to point out more definitely the object of a verb or preposition, even or namely)Conjunctive wawDirect object marker
בַּחוּרֵיכֶ֧םba·ḥū·rê·ḵemcattleH970
√ bâchûwr — properly, selected, iNounmasculine plural constructsecond person masculine plural
bâchûwr — properly, selected; a choice young man The unit's live textual problem. The Masoretic reading stands, and the versions and commentators lean the other way; Pulpit's argument is literary — “Samuel would scarcely place their choicest young men between the female slaves and the asses.” ⚙ The root sense, selected, is the same root as bâchar in v. 18, where Israel does the selecting: if the Hebrew reading is original, the word quietly says that the king takes the chosen ones from a people who chose him.
חֲמוֹרֵיכֶ֖םḥă·mō·w·rê·ḵemand donkeysH2543
√ chămôwr — a male ass (from its dun red)Nounmasculine plural constructsecond person masculine plural
וְעָשָׂ֖הwə·‘ā·śāhand put [them]H6213
√ ʻâsâh — to do or make, in the broadest sense and widest applicationConjunctive wawVerbQalConjunctive perfectthird person masculine singular
ʻâsâh — to do, to make One of the broadest verbs in Hebrew. Its object here is not a thing produced but persons deployed. Gill spells out the usage: the animals go to ploughing, drawing carriages, bearing burdens — and the sentence makes no grammatical distinction between them and the servants listed first.
לִמְלַאכְתּֽוֹ׃lim·laḵ·tōwto his own useH4399
√ mᵉlâʼkâh — properly, deputyship, iPreposition-lNounfeminine singular constructthird person masculine singular
mᵉlâʼkâh — work, business, deputed service The noun used for the craft of the tabernacle and for ordinary labour. Here it belongs wholly to the king (“his work”), which is the whole complaint: the nation's labour has acquired a single owner.
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The LXX. Greek Version here reads, “your best oxen,” which required only the change of one letter of similar sound in the Hebrew word here.
between the slaves (men-servants and maid-servants) and the asses, is very striking and altogether unsuitable
“Young men” in the Heb. appears to be a copyist’s error, and we should probably adopt the Sept. reading “ cattle. ” Men-servants and maid-servants, cattle and asses, are then coupled together naturally.
Cambridge, Ellicott, K&D and Pulpit all prefer the Septuagint's "oxen"; the Masoretic text printed in the interlinear above still reads "your choice young men." The disagreement is recorded, not resolved.
17“He will take a tenth of your flocks, and you yourselves will bec…”+

17He will take a tenth of your flocks, and you yourselves will become his slaves.

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ya‘·śōr ṣō·nə·ḵem wə·’at·tem tih·yū- lōw la·‘ă·ḇā·ḏîm

Literal — word-for-word from the original

Your-flock he-will-tithe; and-you — you shall-become to-him for-slaves.

Where the English smooths the original

  • וְאַתֶּ֖ם וְאַתֶּם (wə·’at·tem, H859) — the independent pronoun “and you,” grammatically unnecessary because the verb already carries “you.” Hebrew adds it only for emphasis. BSB catches it with “you yourselves.” After seven verses of taking sons, daughters, fields, produce, slaves and beasts, the pronoun stands alone at the head of the clause: the last item on the inventory is the people.
  • לַעֲבָדִֽים׃ לַעֲבָדִים (la·‘ă·ḇā·ḏîm, H5650 ʻebed, plural, with lə-) — BSB “his slaves.” Pulpit: “Literally, ‘his slaves.'” The same noun was “his servants” in vv. 14–15, where it named the beneficiaries. The word has not changed; only its referent has. Cambridge sums the speech in one line — “ye will be slaves to the king ye have chosen.”
  • תִּֽהְיוּ־ תִּהְיוּ (tih·yū, H1961 hâyâh, Qal imperfect 2mp) — “you will be,” the verb of existence, answering yihyeh (“this will be the mishpat”) in v. 11. The speech opens and closes with the same verb: what will be the king's practice becomes what you will be.
  • צֹאנְכֶ֖ם צֹאנְכֶם (ṣō·nə·ḵem, H6629 tsôʼn) — a collective singular for a flock of sheep or goats; BSB's plural “flocks” is idiomatic English. Gill notes the herds are included as well. The second and final use of ʻâsar (tithe) falls on the flock, the last productive asset a household holds.
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יַעְשֹׂ֑רya‘·śōrHe will take a tenthH6237
√ ʻâsar — to tithe, iVerbQalImperfectthird person masculine singular
ʻâsar — to tithe The verb's second appearance in three verses, now on livestock — completing the pattern of Leviticus's tithe of herd and flock, but paid to a man. ⚙ Samuel's rhetorical architecture is complete here: God's claims on Israel (a tenth, a first-born, a whole people) have each been reassigned to the king.
צֹאנְכֶ֖םṣō·nə·ḵemof your flocksH6629
√ tsôʼn — a collective name for a flock (of sheep or goats)Nounfeminine singular constructsecond person masculine plural
וְאַתֶּ֖םwə·’at·temand you yourselvesH859
√ ʼattâh — thou and thee, or (plural) ye and youConjunctive wawPronounsecond person masculine plural
ʼattâh — thou, ye (independent pronoun) Hebrew verbs already carry their subject, so an independent pronoun is never required; when one appears it is emphasis, and when it stands first in the clause it is confrontation. Every previous object in the speech has been a possession marked with the suffix “your” — your sons, your daughters, your fields, your flock. Here the suffix falls away and the owners themselves become the object: and you. ⚙ Cambridge reads the clause as the summary of all that precedes, and grammatically that is exactly what it is — the last entry on an inventory that began with what Israel had and ends with Israel.
תִּֽהְיוּ־tih·yū-will becomeH1961
√ hâyâh — to exist, iVerbQalImperfectsecond person masculine plural
ל֥וֹlōwhis
Prepositionthird person masculine singular
לַעֲבָדִֽים׃la·‘ă·ḇā·ḏîmslavesH5650
√ ʻebed — a servantPreposition-lNounmasculine plural
ʻebed — servant, slave Ellicott reads the clause as a summary of everything preceding: the loss of all political and social freedom. Gill preserves the older dispute, whether Abarbinel is right that literal Canaanite-style bondage is meant or whether the phrase means tribute and taxes. ⚙ Either way the noun places Israel where it stood in Egypt, and it places them there by their own vote.
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Ye elders and chiefs of the people must make up your minds, in the event of electing a king, to the loss of all political and social freedom.
made slaves of by him, even as the Canaanitish servants were, according to Abarbinel; though others interpret it more mildly of their being obliged to pay tribute and taxes, for the support of his government.
Literally, "his slaves." Under an absolute monarchy no one is flee.
"flee" is a typographical error for "free" in the digitized public-domain text; it is quoted here as printed rather than silently corrected.
18“When that day comes, you will beg for relief from the king you h…”+

18When that day comes, you will beg for relief from the king you have chosen, but the LORD will not answer you on that day.”

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ha·hū bay·yō·wm ū·zə·‘aq·tem mil·lip̄·nê mal·kə·ḵem ’ă·šer bə·ḥar·tem lā·ḵem Yah·weh ’eṯ·ḵem wə·lō- ya·‘ă·neh ha·hū bay·yō·wm

Literal — word-for-word from the original

And-you-shall-cry-out in-that day from-before your-king whom you-have-chosen for-yourselves — and-not will-YHWH answer you in-that day.

Where the English smooths the original

  • וּזְעַקְתֶּם֙ וּזְעַקְתֶּם (ū·zə·‘aq·tem, H2199 zâʻaq, “to shriek, from anguish or danger”) — BSB's “you will beg for relief” is far too composed. The verb is a scream. It is the same class of cry that in Exodus brought God down to deliver; here it will meet silence, and that reversal is the point of the verse.
  • בְּחַרְתֶּ֖ם בְּחַרְתֶּם (bə·ḥar·tem, H977 bâchar, “properly, to try, i.e. select”) — “you have chosen.” This is the covenant verb of election, the verb by which God chooses Israel, the place, the priest. Here it is in the second person, perfect tense: Israel has done the choosing. BSB keeps “chosen,” but no English reader hears that the word belongs to God's vocabulary.
  • יַעֲנֶ֧ה יַעֲנֶה (ya·‘ă·neh, H6030 ʻânâh, “properly, to eye or heed; to answer”) — BSB “will not answer you.” Cambridge corrects the older “will not hear you” to precisely this: “Rather, will not answer you.” The root means to turn the face toward; God will not refuse to hear, He will refuse to respond.
  • מִלִּפְנֵ֣י מִלִּפְנֵי מַלְכְּכֶם (mil·lip̄·nê, H6440 pânîym with min + lə-) — literally “from before the face of your king.” BSB: “for relief from the king.” Cambridge: “appealing to God to escape from his tyranny.” The idiom of face runs through the unit: the sons run before the king's face (v. 11), and the people will one day scream to get away from it.
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הַה֔וּאha·hūWhen thatH1931
√ hûwʼ — he (she or it)ArticlePronounthird person masculine singular
בַּיּ֣וֹםbay·yō·wmday comesH3117
√ yôwm — a day (as the warm hours), whether literal (from sunrise to sunset, or from one sunset to the next), or figurative (a space of time defined by an associated term), (often used adverb)Preposition-b, ArticleNounmasculine singular
yôwm — a day Repeated as an inclusio: “in that day… in that day.” The frame is deliberate. One day holds both the scream and the non-answer.
וּזְעַקְתֶּם֙ū·zə·‘aq·temyou will begH2199
√ zâʻaq — to shriek (from anguish or danger)Conjunctive wawVerbQalConjunctive perfectsecond person masculine plural
zâʻaq — to shriek, from anguish or danger The classic Hebrew cry of the oppressed. In Israel's founding story that cry is answered; Samuel says this one will not be. Henry draws the moral consequence: “When we bring ourselves into distress by our own wrong desires and projects, we justly forfeit the comfort of prayer.” Poole grounds the refusal in reciprocity, comparing Proverbs 1:24 and Zechariah 7:13.
מִלִּפְנֵ֣יmil·lip̄·nêfor relief fromH6440
√ pânîym — the face (as the part that turns)Preposition-m, Preposition-lNouncommon plural construct
מַלְכְּכֶ֔םmal·kə·ḵemthe kingH4428
√ melek — a kingNounmasculine singular constructsecond person masculine plural
אֲשֶׁ֥ר’ă·šerH834
√ ʼăsher — who, which, what, thatPronounrelative
בְּחַרְתֶּ֖םbə·ḥar·temyou have chosenH977
√ bâchar — properly, to try, iVerbQalPerfectsecond person masculine plural
bâchar — properly, to try, i.e. select; to choose The theological pivot of the unit. Deuteronomy 17:15 grants Israel a king whom the LORD your God shall choose; here the verb's subject is “you.” ⚙ The tragedy Samuel names is not that Israel wanted a king but that Israel wanted to do the choosing — and the sentence is that they will get exactly what they chose, and keep it. Geneva's gloss is sharp: they long for their afflictions, “into which you cast yourselves willingly.”
לָכֶ֑םlā·ḵem. . .
Prepositionsecond person masculine plural
יְהוָ֛הYah·wehbut the LORDH3068
√ Yᵉhôvâh — Jehovah, Jewish national name of GodNounpropermasculine singular
אֶתְכֶ֖ם’eṯ·ḵemH853
√ ʼêth — properly, self (but generally used to point out more definitely the object of a verb or preposition, even or namely)Direct object markersecond person masculine plural
וְלֹֽא־wə·lō-will notH3808
√ lôʼ — not (the simple or absConjunctive wawAdverbNegative particle
יַעֲנֶ֧הya·‘ă·nehanswer youH6030
√ ʻânâh — properly, to eye or (generally) to heed, iVerbQalImperfectthird person masculine singular
ʻânâh — to eye, to heed, to answer The negated verb of the unit's last line. Cambridge records that the Septuagint adds a clause here — “because ye have chosen yourselves a king” — making the reason explicit; the Hebrew simply stops, and the silence of the text enacts the silence it predicts.
הַהֽוּא׃ha·hūon thatH1931
√ hûwʼ — he (she or it)ArticlePronounthird person masculine singular
בַּיּ֥וֹםbay·yō·wmdayH3117
√ yôwm — a day (as the warm hours), whether literal (from sunrise to sunset, or from one sunset to the next), or figurative (a space of time defined by an associated term), (often used adverb)Preposition-b, ArticleNounmasculine singular
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When we bring ourselves into distress by our own wrong desires and projects, we justly forfeit the comfort of prayer, and the benefit of Divine aid.
Because you do not repent for your sins, but because you long for your afflictions, into which you cast yourselves willingly.
is drawn from the despotic conduct of the heathen kings, and does not presuppose, as many have maintained, the times of the later kings
K&D is arguing against the nineteenth-century critical claim that this speech was composed after the monarchy's abuses were known; Ellicott cites the Speaker's Commentary on the same side. The dating question remains contested outside these sources.

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i. The one word handed on whole — 8:10

The verse contains no argument, only a delivery. K&D: Samuel spoke “in accordance with the instructions of God,” telling the people all that God had said and then proclaiming “the right of the king.” Gill stresses that the audience is not a faction — “this was an united request of the people” — and Cambridge specifies the mechanism, “through their representatives the elders,” so that what follows is addressed to a nation acting through its constitutional organs, not to a mob. Grammatically the point is כָּל־דִּבְרֵי יְהוָה (kāl-diḇ·rê Yah·weh): all stands first and governs. Nothing is withheld from people who have already decided. ⚙ And the participle that names them, הַשֹּׁאֲלִים (haš·šō·’ă·lîm, H7592 shâʼal), is not an action they performed but a description of what they now are: the askers — the very verb from which the name of the king they will receive is formed.

ii. Mishpat — the word the whole speech is fought over — 8:11

Everything turns on מִשְׁפַּט (miš·paṭ, H4941), a judicial word covering verdict, statute, custom and penalty at once. Cambridge renders it “the right of the king; such prerogatives as an absolute monarch claims.” Pulpit narrows it: “not so much the legal right itself, as the way in which that right was exercised.” Geneva denies the legal sense altogether — kings do not have this authority “by their office,” but “such as reign in God's wrath would usurp this over their brethren, contrary to the law, De 17:20.” Benson makes the same observation from the syntax: Samuel does not say the manner of a king, but “the manner of the king that shall reign over you.” Ellicott dramatizes the choice as a constitutional one, asking whether the elders were “really willing to give up their Republic for a Despotism” — his republican vocabulary is Victorian, not Hebrew, though the alternative he names is real. Against all of this stands the verse's actual grammar: a single verb, יִקָּח (yiq·qāḥ, H3947), which Poole insists means seizure — “injuriously and by violence, as this Hebrew word is oft used.” K&D adds a small but telling detail: the chariot is singular, and pârâsh is “not a rider, but a saddle-horse,” so this opening image is of a state-carriage and its escort, not a war machine. The first thing the monarchy costs is not blood. It is sons, standing decoratively beside a vehicle.

iii. The household dismantled, trade by trade — 8:12–8:16

Samuel now works through an Israelite household as an inventory. Barnes notes the military ranks are nothing new — “as old as the time of Moses,” shared even with the Philistines — so the grievance is ownership, not organisation; Benson concedes the offices look like honours and then removes the floor beneath them, since the honour is held at a king's pleasure and “those faint shadows of glory could not recompense them.” Then the agricultural conscription, which Pulpit identifies as the historical fuse: forced labour was “the chief cause of the revolt of the ten tribes from Rehoboam.” The rare noun חֲרִישׁ (ḥă·rîš, H2758, only 3 verses in the canon) means the ploughing or its season, and Barnes gives the Hebrew idiom straight — “to plow his plowing.” The daughters follow: רַקָּחוֹת (raq·qā·ḥōwṯ, H7548), which Cambridge traces through the archaic “confectionaries” back to Exodus 30:35, “compounds of spices and perfumes”; JFB observes that such work filled “the palaces even of petty princes.” Pulpit then notes the mercy of Samuel's restraint: he “does not mention the far worse use to which Solomon put their daughters.” The land goes next, and here the commentators openly divide — Poole and Pulpit read Naboth's vineyard as evidence of despotic seizure, Gill reads the same story as evidence that kings could not simply seize (“otherwise Ahab would have taken away Naboth's vineyard at once”). Then the tithe, twice, using the rare verb עָשַׂר (ʻâsar, H6237, 8 verses); Pulpit measures it exactly — the king “will cost you as much as all the ordinances of religion.” At v. 15 the recipients are סָרִיסָיו (sā·rî·sāw, H5631): K&D takes it broadly for “royal chamberlains,” Poole literally, as a charge that the king will make eunuchs of his own people. And at v. 16 the text itself becomes uncertain: Ellicott, Cambridge, K&D and Pulpit all prefer the Septuagint's “oxen” to the Masoretic “choice young men,” K&D calling the transmitted word “very striking and altogether unsuitable,” Pulpit arguing from placement that “Samuel would scarcely place their choicest young men between the female slaves and the asses.”

iv. And you — the last line of the inventory — 8:17–8:18

The flock is tithed, and then the pronoun arrives: וְאַתֶּם (wə·’at·tem), grammatically redundant, emphatic by design. Cambridge: “To sum up all briefly, ye will be slaves to the king ye have chosen.” Ellicott hears it as an address to the elders standing in front of Samuel — make up your minds “to the loss of all political and social freedom.” Pulpit gives the literal force of the noun: “his slaves.” K&D catches what the vocabulary has been doing all along — the same word that named the king's beneficiaries in vv. 14–15 now names the whole nation, so that “the king would make all the people into his servants or slaves.” Then the last verse, and the only verb of prayer in the unit: זָעַק (zâʻaq, H2199), to shriek from anguish. Cambridge corrects the old rendering of the divine response — “Rather, will not answer you” — and records that the Septuagint supplies the reason the Hebrew leaves unspoken, “because ye have chosen yourselves a king.” Poole roots the silence in reciprocity (“because you will not hear him, nor obey his counsel, in this day”), comparing Proverbs 1:24 and Zechariah 7:13; Geneva is harsher, saying they long for the afflictions “into which you cast yourselves willingly”; Henry generalizes it into pastoral warning: distress of our own manufacture “justly forfeits the comfort of prayer.” Ellicott and Pulpit both then trace the fulfilment through the northern kingdom, where “no prayers then availed.” K&D, alone here, defends the speech's antiquity: it “is drawn from the despotic conduct of the heathen kings,” not retrojected from Israel's later experience.

Read under Sola Scriptura — this tool’s own fallible reading (⚙)

⚙ Read the speech by its verbs and it is not primarily a warning about monarchy. Five times: he will take (לָקַח). Twice: he will tithe (עָשַׂר). Twice: he will give (נָתַן) — and never to them. Israel had a King whose relation to them was described by the opposite verbs: He gave them a land, vineyards and olive groves they did not plant, and asked back a tenth. What they request in chapter 8 is an exchange of one tithe-taker for another, and Samuel's argument is not that kings are wicked but that this one will occupy, item by item, every place God already held — the tenth, the firstfruits of the sons, the claim on the whole people. That is why the last word is עֲבָדִים, slaves: the nation that God brought out of a house of slaves now votes itself back into one. And the deepest wound is in the verb of v. 18, בָּחַר (bâchar) — the election word. Everywhere else God is its subject; here Israel is. The judgment pronounced is therefore not destruction but consent: you will be given what you chose, and you will be permitted to keep it. The silence of God in v. 18 is not the withdrawal of His love; it is the honouring of a vote. ⚙ Offered to be tested: the mercy hidden in this passage is that God says yes at all, and that the anointing of a king in the chapters following is His work and not merely their punishment — which is why the story does not end here.

The line that follows is the tool's own fallible reading, not a verse of Scripture: “They asked for a king to carry them, and were told what the king would carry off.”

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AI-generated connections. Each carries a verification badge with a recorded basis; contested links are flagged.

His ploughing, in your ploughing season verbal / quotation — confirmed

The rare noun חָרִישׁ (chârîysh, H2758) appears in only three verses in the canon, and it names the ploughing or its season. At Genesis 45:6 Joseph tells his brothers there are five years left “in which there shall be neither earing nor harvest”; at Exodus 34:21 the sabbath command is made explicit precisely for the two moments a farmer can least spare — “in earing time and in harvest thou shalt rest.” The Verifier finds both those verses sharing chârîysh and קָצִיר (qâtsîyr, H7105) with 1 Samuel 8:12, the same pair. Barnes gives the Hebrew flatly: “to plow his plowing.” ⚙ The force of the link is legal: Exodus protects the ploughing season even from the farmer's own necessity, and the king in Samuel's warning will requisition exactly that protected time. Pulpit's historical note lands on the same nerve — for “a nation of agriculturists to have to leave their own fields just when their presence at home was most needed” was not merely loss but wrong.

Exodus 34:21 · Genesis 45:6

basis: Verifier: shared Hebrew lexemes H2758 chârîysh (rare — in 3 vv canon-wide) and H7105 qâtsîyr (in 49 vv) linking 1 Samuel 8:12 with Exodus 34:21 and Genesis 45:6. The rarity of chârîysh makes this a genuine verbal link; no party is quoting another, so the claim is lexical contact, not citation.

A second tenth — the rival tithe verbal / quotation — confirmed

עָשַׂר (ʻâsar, H6237) is a rare verb, occurring in eight verses. Every other occurrence concerns what is owed to God: Jacob's vow at Bethel, “I will surely give the tenth unto thee” (Genesis 28:22); the annual tithe of the increase of the field (Deuteronomy 14:22); the third-year tithe (Deuteronomy 26:12); Nehemiah's restored Levitical tithes (Nehemiah 10:37–38). 1 Samuel 8:15 and 8:17 use that same verb twice, of a king. Poole states the arithmetic: “besides the several tenths which God hath reserved for his service and servants, he will, when he pleaseth, impose another tenth upon you.” Pulpit turns it into a price tag — the king “will cost you as much as all the ordinances of religion.” Gill supplies the counterweight, documenting from Aristotle and Diodorus that a royal tenth was the ordinary ancient rate, which is exactly why the demand would have seemed reasonable. ⚙ The word chosen, however, is not a tax word. It is a worship word.

Genesis 28:22 · Deuteronomy 14:22 · Deuteronomy 26:12 · Nehemiah 10:37

basis: Verifier: shared Hebrew lexeme H6237 ʻâsar, rare (in 8 vv canon-wide), linking 1 Samuel 8:15/8:17 with Genesis 28:22, Deuteronomy 14:22, Deuteronomy 26:12 and Nehemiah 10:37–38. Deuteronomy 14:22 additionally shares H7704 sâdeh and H2233 zeraʻ. Lexical contact on a rare cultic verb; no quotation is claimed in either direction.

Chariots, horsemen and runners — the warning kept as an inventory structural / thematic — confirmed

2 Chronicles 9:25 counts Solomon's stalls of horses and chariots and his twelve thousand horsemen, using מֶרְכָּבָה (merkâbâh, H4818), פָּרָשׁ (pârâsh, H6571) and רֶכֶב (rekeb, H7393) — the three vehicle-and-horse words of 1 Samuel 8:11–12. The Verifier confirms the overlap; all three lexemes are common, so this is a shared register rather than a citation. Cambridge names the historical outcome without hedging: “Prosperous as was Solomon's reign, it tended in this direction. See 1 Kings 5:13-18; 1 Kings 12:4.” Ellicott reads the sequel the same way, and Pulpit reads Rehoboam's levies as the direct continuation. ⚙ The chronicler is not alluding to Samuel; he is tallying, admiringly, the exact items Samuel listed as the cost.

2 Chronicles 9:25 · 1 Kings 12:4

basis: Verifier: shared Hebrew lexemes H4818 merkâbâh (in 41 vv), H6571 pârâsh (in 54 vv), H7393 rekeb (in 104 vv) between 1 Samuel 8:11–12 and 2 Chronicles 9:25 — real lexical contact but all three words are common, so the tier is thematic, not verbal. 1 Kings 12:4 carries no computed lexeme overlap; it is included on the historical reading recorded by Cambridge, Ellicott and Pulpit, which is editorial rather than lexical.

The household reassembled as Pharaoh's court structural / thematic — confirmed

Genesis 40:2 sets three words beside each other that 1 Samuel 8 also uses: שַׂר (sar, H8269, the chief), אָפָה (ʼâphâh, H644, to bake) and סָרִיס (çârîyç, H5631, eunuch/officer) — Pharaoh's chief baker and chief cupbearer, both his officers. Samuel's speech assembles the same court out of Israelite children: chiefs (v. 12), bakers (v. 13), eunuchs (v. 15). ⚙ The shape of the warning is therefore Egypt, rebuilt domestically: the very court from which God brought them out is the court they are asking to be staffed by their own sons and daughters, and the speech ends by naming them ʻăbādîm, the word for what they were in Egypt. K&D confirms the summary force of that last clause — “the king would make all the people into his servants or slaves” — though the Egypt reading itself is the tool's, not his.

Genesis 40:2

basis: Verifier: shared Hebrew lexemes H8269 sar (in 368 vv), H644 ʼâphâh (in 24 vv), H5631 çârîyç (in 42 vv) between 1 Samuel 8:12–15 and Genesis 40:2. The lexemes are common to moderately common, so the recorded basis supports a shared court-vocabulary motif, not a verbal citation; the Egypt-reversal reading built on it is ⚙ synthesis.

Vineyards and olive groves you did not plant structural / thematic — confirmed

Joshua 24:13 describes the gift of the land in the very nouns the king will confiscate — כֶּרֶם (kerem, H3754) and זַיִת (zayith, H2132): vineyards and oliveyards “which ye planted not.” Exodus 23:11 places the same pair under the sabbath-year law that feeds the poor; Nehemiah 5:11 demands their restoration to mortgaged farmers. 1 Samuel 8:14 has the king take “the good” of exactly these. ⚙ The vineyard and the olive are the canon's standard image of settled, inherited, generational security, which is why their seizure is not measured as revenue but as the undoing of the conquest. Poole and Pulpit both reach for Naboth here; Gill resists, arguing the king took produce rather than title. The lexical link is genuine but the words are common, so the tier stays thematic.

Joshua 24:13 · Exodus 23:11 · Nehemiah 5:11

basis: Verifier: shared Hebrew lexemes H2132 zayith (in 36 vv), H3754 kerem (in 81 vv) with Joshua 24:13, Nehemiah 9:25 and Amos 4:9; H7704 sâdeh (in 309 vv) added at Exodus 23:11 and Nehemiah 5:11. Common lexemes forming a shared land-inheritance motif — explicitly not a quotation link.

God gave them a king in His anger flagged — verify source

Barnes, commenting on this transaction, sends the reader to two passages: “For a comment on this transaction, see Hosea 13:9-11; Acts 13:21-22.” Hosea has God say He gave a king in anger and took him away in wrath; Paul at Pisidian Antioch narrates the same request, God's grant of Saul, and the raising up of David. ⚙ The link is doctrinal and canonical rather than lexical: the Verifier computes no shared lexemes for either reference, and Acts is Greek, so no shared Strong's number is even possible between it and 1 Samuel. The provenance of the reading is Barnes's own cross-reference (JFB and Gill reach the same judgment independently, that the request was granted “in anger”), and it is recorded here as such rather than as a demonstrated verbal connection.

Hosea 13:9-11 · Acts 13:21-22

basis: No Verifier-computed lexeme basis; the connection is Barnes's editorial cross-reference, repeated by JFB and Gill. Acts 13:21–22 is Greek and 1 Samuel is Hebrew, so a shared-Strong's verbal basis is impossible in principle. Flagged so the reader checks the reference rather than trusting the chain.

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The King who does not take ancient/widely-held

⚙ Every verb in Samuel's warning moves in one direction: לָקַח (lâqach, H3947), he will take — sons, daughters, fields, produce, servants, beasts, and at last the people themselves as עֲבָדִים (ʻăbādîm, H5650, slaves). Jesus describes the same office in the same terms — the rulers of the nations lord it over them — and then reverses every verb: the Son of Man came not to be served but to serve, and to give His life a ransom for many. Where Samuel's king takes sons, this King gives His own life; where Samuel's king makes the nation slaves, Paul says He took the form of a slave Himself. The connection cannot be verbal in the technical sense — the New Testament is Greek and shares no Strong's number with 1 Samuel — but the structural inversion is exact and point-for-point, and it is the oldest Christian way of reading the contrast between the kings of the nations and the King who was crucified.

Mark 10:42-45 · Philippians 2:7

Saul asked for, David chosen: the request answered beyond itself ancient/widely-held

Barnes points to Acts 13:21-22 as “a comment on this transaction”: Israel asked for a king, God gave them Saul, and then removed him and raised up David — of whose seed, Paul continues in the next verse, God brought Israel a Saviour. ⚙ The unit's own vocabulary sets this up: at 8:18 the verb is בָּחַר (bâchar, H977), the election verb, and its subject is Israel — “the king you have chosen.” The rest of the canon takes that verb back: the king God chooses is David, and the King God chooses finally is David's son. Ellicott reads the tragedy of the request as the surrender of “the old grand ideal of a nation… ruled over directly by a King whose throne and home were in the eternal heavens.” The apostolic reading is that the ideal was not abandoned but fulfilled in a man who is that King. This is the widely-held redemptive-historical reading; the reliance on a Greek text means it is a canonical and theological connection, never a verbal one.

Acts 13:21-22 · Deuteronomy 17:15

The cry that was not answered — in that day novel

⚙ This is offered as the tool's own reading and marked novel. 1 Samuel 8:18 ends with a scream, זָעַק (zâʻaq, H2199), and a refusal: “the LORD will not answer you in that day.” Cambridge insists on that rendering — “Rather, will not answer you” — and the root עָנָה (ʻânâh, H6030) means to turn the face toward. ⚙ There is one other place in Scripture where a cry to God on a named day meets no answer, and it is on the lips of the King Israel eventually received: “My God, my God, why have You forsaken Me?” — where Psalm 22 says plainly “I cry in the daytime, but You do not answer.” The proposal is that the unanswered cry Samuel pronounces over a people who chose their own king was finally borne by the King God chose. The sources in this unit do not make this connection; Poole and Henry read v. 18 only as forfeited prayer, and no lexical basis links the Hebrew of 1 Samuel to the Greek of Matthew. Tested and rejected, nothing in the unit's sourced material is lost.

Psalm 22:1-2 · Matthew 27:46

Apparatus & Provenance

The biblical text is the Berean Standard Bible (BSB), public domain (CC0). Hebrew/Greek text, transliteration, morphology and Strong’s are transcribed from the Berean interlinear (CC0) + Strong’s lexicons (PD); the literal renderings, divergence notes, word notes and all synthesis are this tool’s own work (⚙) — fallible; verify them.

Named voices, quoted verbatim from public-domain works:

Text. 1 Samuel 8:16 carries a real textual problem. The interlinear above prints בַּחוּרֵיכֶם (ba·ḥū·rê·ḵem, H970, “your choice young men”), and the BSB rendering in the same brief reads “your best cattle” — i.e. the English follows the Septuagint's τὰ βουκόλια, presupposing בּקריכם. Ellicott, Cambridge, K&D and Pulpit all prefer the Greek reading; K&D calls the Hebrew word “very striking and altogether unsuitable,” Pulpit argues from placement, Cambridge from the natural pairing of servants with cattle. The Hebrew as transmitted has not been emended here, and both readings are recorded in the notes and divergences for v. 16. At 8:18 Cambridge reports that the Septuagint adds “because ye have chosen yourselves a king”; that clause is absent from the Hebrew and is not treated as text.

Interlinear ordering. The word indices in this unit follow the Berean interlinear's presentation, which orders entries to the English rather than strictly to the Hebrew line (clearly visible at 8:10, where the direct object marker precedes the verb, and at 8:11, 8:13, 8:14 and 8:16, where the object marker is separated from its noun). The literal renderings above are built from Hebrew word order, so they will not always run in index sequence. The transliteration printed for 8:14 index 0 (wə·’e·ṯś-) is anomalous in the source data; the surface form is the ordinary וְאֶת־.

Sources. Matthew Henry's entry in this unit is a single block comment on 8:10–22, so the same paragraph stands behind every verse; it is quoted once, at 8:18, to avoid the appearance of nine distinct judgments. Poole has no note at 8:10. Gill's classical citations (Aristotle, Pliny, Diodorus) are from eighteenth-century editions and function as historical illustration. The Pulpit Commentary's text at 8:17 contains the typographical error “flee” for “free” in the digitized public-domain source; it is quoted as printed and flagged in the editorial note rather than silently corrected.

What is uncertain. (1) Whether מִשְׁפַּט at 8:11 names a legal entitlement or a predicted practice — Cambridge, Pulpit and Geneva give three different answers, and the unit does not adjudicate. (2) Whether סָרִיס at 8:15 is literal (Poole, Pulpit) or an administrative title (K&D). (3) Whether Naboth's vineyard proves royal seizure was possible (Poole, Pulpit) or impossible (Gill). (4) Whether this speech predates the monarchy — K&D and the Speaker's Commentary cited by Ellicott argue it does, against nineteenth-century critics; that debate is outside these sources and is not settled here. (5) The Christ entry titled “The cry that was not answered” is marked novel and is the tool's own proposal, unsupported by any commentator in this unit.

= human, public-domain source, quoted and named. = machine synthesis, to be verified. Flagged cross-references are left visible on purpose — the verifier working in the open. “Search the Scriptures daily, whether those things were so.” (Acts 17:11)