Genesis4:1–16

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• יָדַע BSB’s “had relations with” softens יָדַע (yāḏa‘), the plain verb “to know.” Scripture’s first word for conjugal union is the word for knowledge — intimacy as deep acquaintance, not mere appetite. The same verb returns in v. 9 when Cain says “I do not know” (יָדַעְתִּי); the man who knew his wife claims not to know where his brother is.
• קָנִיתִי “I have brought forth” flattens a wordplay. The verb is קָנִיתִי (qānîṯî, “I have gotten / acquired”), from which the name Qayin (Cain) is sounded out. Cambridge is blunt: “The word ‘Cain’ does not mean ‘gotten’; but Eve’s joyful utterance gives a popular etymology.” The name is a pun on possession, not a definition.
• אֶת־ The single most disputed word in the verse. BSB’s “with the help of” renders אֶת (’eṯ) — but which ’eṯ? It is either the preposition “with” (H854) or the untranslatable object-marker (H853). Read as object-marker, the words are “I have gotten a man — even YHWH,” the reading Luther and the Targum of Jonathan defended; read as preposition, “I have gotten a man with YHWH’s help.” The grammar genuinely permits both.

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• וַתֹּסֶף BSB’s “Later she gave birth” renders a single verb, וַתֹּסֶף (wat·tō·sep̄, “and-she-added”) plus the infinitive to-bear. The Hebrew idiom “added to bear” says nothing of how much later; Pulpit notes the absence of the usual “and she conceived” (וַתַּהַר) here, which led Calvin and Kimchi to suspect Abel was Cain’s twin.
• הָבֶל “Abel” anglicizes הֶבֶל (Heḇel) — the very word for breath, vapor, emptiness that drums through Ecclesiastes (“vanity of vanities”). The name is a sentence about the brevity of his life. English readers never hear that the murdered man is literally named Fleeting-Breath.
• רֹעֵה צֹאן “keeper of sheep” is too tame: רֹעֵה צֹאן (rō‘êh ṣōn) is “shepherd of flock,” the participle that will name Israel’s kings, its God (Psalm 23), and the Lord Himself. The narrator places the murdered righteous one in the office of shepherd; JFB observes Abel “is mentioned first… on account of the pre-eminence of his religious character.”

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• מִקֵּץ יָמִים “in the course of time” is loose; the Hebrew is מִקֵּץ יָמִים (miq·qêṣ yāmîm), literally “at the end of days.” The same phrase elsewhere marks a fixed term (a year, a season). Commentators split between “after a long indefinite period” and “at the year’s end / harvest” — but the text fixes a terminus, a set time for worship, not a vague drift.
• מִנְחָה “an offering” under-specifies מִנְחָה (minḥāh), a gift / tribute — the word Jacob uses for the present he sends Esau (Gen 32). In the later Law minḥāh becomes the technical term for the bloodless grain-offering; yet here it covers both brothers’ gifts, Abel’s animal included. Ellicott warns against importing Levitical categories the text does not yet know.
• מִפְּרִי “some of the fruit” may carry more freight than BSB shows. מִפְּרִי (mip·pə·rî) is simply “from fruit” — but set against Abel’s firstlings… of the fat (v. 4), the unqualified “from” is read by many as the quiet hint that Cain brought ordinary produce, not firstfruits. The contrast is in the modifiers, not the nouns.

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• וּמֵחֶלְבֵהֶן “the best portions” interprets, where Hebrew names a thing: מֵחֶלְבֵהֶן (mê·ḥel·ḇê·hen) is “from their fat.” In the Law the fat is YHWH’s reserved portion (Lev 3:16). Abel gives the richest part of the firstborn — Keil: “the fattest of the firstlings, and not merely the first good one that came to hand.”
• וַיִּשַׁע “looked with favor” renders וַיִּשַׁע (way·yiša‘), “and he gazed upon.” JFB notes the verb means to look with a keen, earnest glance — some ancients heard in it a kindling into fire, the favor shown by flame consuming the gift. The text reports the regard; the manner (fire?) is inference, not statement.
• גַם־ The little particle גַם (gam, “also / even”) — dropped from BSB’s smooth reading — pairs the brothers: Abel he also brought. The narrative withholds any verdict on the gifts until YHWH’s response; the difference Hebrews 11:4 will name as faith is not stated in Genesis, only shown by acceptance.

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• וַיִּחַר לְקַיִן מְאֹד “Cain became very angry” tames a vivid idiom. The Hebrew is וַיִּחַר לְקַיִן מְאֹד — literally “and it burned to Cain exceedingly.” Ellicott: “it burned to Cain exceedingly: that is, his heart was full of hot indignant feelings.” Anger in Hebrew is heat; the same root will name God’s question in v. 6, “Why has it burned to you?”
• פָּנָיו “his countenance fell” keeps the Hebrew picture, but note פָּנָיו (pānāw) is plural — “his faces fell.” The fallen face is the visible verdict of a fallen heart; it is the same word God uses in v. 6 and the same picture Cambridge traces from wounded pride to revenge to murder.
• וַיִּפְּלוּ The verb וַיִּפְּלוּ (way·yip·pə·lū, “they fell”) is the ordinary verb for falling — the felled face anticipates the felled brother. God’s remedy in v. 7 is the antonym, “lifting up” (שְׂאֵת): a face cast down can be raised again, if Cain will do well.

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• לָמָּה The doubled לָמָּה (lām·māh, “why?”) is God’s method, not His ignorance. As with Adam (“Where are you?”) the question is pastoral — Cambridge: it serves “to arrest the progress of evil thoughts, by simple words demanding self-examination.” God reasons with the angry man before judgment, exactly as a father with a child.
• חָרָה God repeats Cain’s own heat-word, חָרָה (ḥārāh, “to burn”), from v. 5 — “Why has it burned to you?” The diagnosis names the symptom precisely. The burning that God here questions is the same fire that, unmastered, will consume Abel.

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• שְׂאֵת “will you not be accepted?” is an interpretation; the Hebrew is the bare noun שְׂאֵת (śə’êṯ, “a lifting up”). Set against the fallen face of v. 5, the natural sense is “is there not a lifting up [of the countenance]?” — your downcast face shall be raised. A secondary sense of the same root, “to lift / bear away,” let older versions hear “forgiveness.” The word is deliberately spare.
• רֹבֵץ “crouching” rightly catches רֹבֵץ (rōḇêṣ) — the word for an animal lying in wait. But the grammar is jagged: sin (חַטָּאת) is feminine, yet the participle and pronouns are masculine. The mismatch personifies sin as a male beast at the door — Maclaren’s “crouching tiger ready to spring.”
• תְּשׁוּקָתוֹ “it desires you” renders תְּשׁוּקָתוֹ (təšûqāṯô, “its desire”) — a rare word (only three times in Scripture). Its other famous use is 3:16, the woman’s desire for her husband. The same clause-pattern — desire… rule over — is reused here, now of sin and the sinner. The verbal echo is exact and deliberate (see Threads).
• תִּמְשָׁל־בּוֹ “you must master it” renders תִּמְשָׁל (timšāl, “you shall rule”) + בּוֹ (“over it”) — the verb מָשַׁל (māšal, “to rule”) of 3:16. Whether it reads as command (“rule over it!”) or promise (“you shall rule”) is the hinge of the verse; Maclaren hears in it “the command, which is also a promise.”

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• וַיֹּאמֶר BSB “Then Cain said to his brother Abel, ‘Let us go out to the field’” supplies the bracketed clause. The Hebrew has only וַיֹּאמֶר (way·yō·mer, “and Cain said”) — and then a gap. The words spoken are missing from the Masoretic text; the Samaritan, LXX, and Syriac add “Let us go into the field.” Cambridge judges the gap an early textual disturbance. The honest literal records the silence.
• וַיָּקָם “rose up against” is exact: וַיָּקָם (way·yā·qām, “he arose”) + ’el (“against”) is the Hebrew idiom for launching an assault (cf. Judges 8:21). The verb of rising stands grimly beside the brother who will not rise again.
• אָחִיו “his brother” (אָחִיו, ’āḥîw) is the drumbeat of the verse — it sounds twice in this one line and seven times across vv. 2–11. Keil: the writer “intentionally repeats again and again the words ‘his brother,’ to bring clearly out the horror of the sin.” Murder is fratricide; the bond denied is named at every step.

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• אֵי “Where” (אֵי, ’ê) re-stages 3:9, where God asked Adam “Where are you?” Both questions are God’s, both already know the answer; both summon the guilty to self-accusation. Benson: the question was asked “that he might convince him of his crime.”
• לֹא יָדַעְתִּי “I do not know!” renders לֹא יָדַעְתִּי (lō yāḏa‘tî) — and seals a bitter irony: the verb yāḏa‘ opened the unit (v. 1, the man knew his wife). The same verb now frames the first lie. JFB: “a falsehood. One sin leads to another.”
• הֲשֹׁמֵר “keeper” is שֹׁמֵר (šōmêr) — the participle of guarding / watching, the same office Adam held over the garden (2:15). Cambridge hears a sneer: Abel kept the flock; “Am I the keeper’s keeper?” Cain’s question, meant to dismiss responsibility, in fact confesses it — for every man is his brother’s keeper.

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• דְּמֵי “blood” is singular in English; the Hebrew דְּמֵי (dəmê) is plural — “bloods.” The plural of blood is the Hebrew for bloodshed, murder. The Targum and Pulpit hear in the plural the cry not of one man only but of all the offspring he might have fathered; the verb that follows is plural to match.
• צֹעֲקִים “cries out” renders צֹעֲקִים (ṣō‘ăqîm) — a plural participle agreeing with bloods: the bloods are crying. צָעַק is the shriek of the oppressed for redress (Exodus 3:7). Innocent blood has a voice God cannot un-hear — Keil: it “reaches God, as the cry of a wicked deed demanding vengeance.”
• קוֹל “The voice of” may overweight קוֹל (qōl); Cambridge follows Driver in rendering it as an exclamation — “Hark! thy brother’s blood…” Either way the dead is not silent: the murdered man, mute on earth, is loud in heaven. The blood cries from הָאֲדָמָה — the same ground Cain tilled and that drank the blood.

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• אָרוּר “cursed and banished” expands a single word, אָרוּר (’ārûr) — a Qal passive participle, “having-been-cursed,” a standing verdict. It is the very form that fell on the serpent (3:14) and the ground (3:17). Pulpit marks the escalation: this is “the first curse pronounced against a human being” — Adam and Eve were not cursed; Cain is.
• מִן־הָאֲדָמָה “from the ground” (מִן הָאֲדָמָה) is genuinely ambiguous: cursed away from the ground (driven off it) or cursed by / out of the ground (it turns against him). Keil leans to the latter — the soil that drank the blood withdraws its strength. The same ’ăḏāmāh that received Abel’s blood now refuses Cain its fruit.
• פָּצְתָה אֶת־פִּיהָ “opened its mouth to receive” is a startling image kept intact: פָּצְתָה אֶת־פִּיהָ — the earth “opened its mouth” to drink the blood. Geneva: the earth “mercifully received the blood you most cruelly shed.” The ground is more humane to Abel than his brother was — yet Keil warns against making the soil an accomplice; it is God’s minister, not a partner in the sin.

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• כֹּחָהּ “its produce” renders כֹּחָהּ (kō·ḥāh), literally “its strength / vigor.” The earth has strength to give and will withhold it; Cambridge cites Job 31:39 where the same word means the land’s fruits. Cain the tiller is sentenced where he is strongest — his trade itself will fail him.
• נָע וָנָד “a fugitive and a wanderer” renders the alliterating pair נָע וָנָד (nā‘ wā·nāḏ) — “staggering and straying.” The first word (נוּעַ) is to reel, totter; the second (נוּד) to wander, and it seeds the place-name Nod (v. 16). The LXX heard “groaning and trembling.” The doubling binds the body’s unrest to the conscience’s.
• לֹא־תֹסֵף “no longer yield” renders the idiom לֹא תֹסֵף תֵּת — literally “it shall not add to give.” The same verb yāsap̄ (“to add”) opened v. 2 (Eve “added to bear” Abel). The ground that once added life now refuses to add increase: barrenness mirrors the murder.

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• עֲוֹנִי “My punishment” chooses one side of a word that means both: עֲוֹנִי (‘ăwōnî) is “my iniquity” — and, by the Hebrew habit of naming a deed and its result by one word, “my punishment for iniquity.” Ellicott captures the fusion: “My sin is past forgiveness, and its result is an intolerable punishment.” BSB rightly reads punishment, since Cain mourns his sentence, not his sin.
• מִנְּשֹׂא “than I can bear” renders מִנְּשֹׂא (min·nəśō), from נָשָׂא (nāśā’, “to lift, bear, take away”) — the very root that stood in 4:7 as the lifting up (שְׂאֵת) offered to Cain. The word for the grace he refused now frames his despair: too great to be borne — or, the versions add, too great to be forgiven (taken away). Keil chooses borne, since Cain laments severity, not guilt.

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• גֵּרַשְׁתָּ “You have driven me” renders גֵּרַשְׁתָּ (gêraštā, Piel) — the same verb used when God drove out (3:24, וַיְגָרֶשׁ) the man from Eden. Cain’s exile rhymes with Adam’s: Bonar’s phrase, “Adam’s sin brought expulsion from the inner circle, Cain’s from the outer.” The driving-out repeats, one ring further from God.
• וּמִפָּנֶיךָ אֶסָּתֵר “from Your face I will be hidden” keeps וּמִפָּנֶיךָ אֶסָּתֵר — but Cain misjudges. He assumes God’s face (פָּנִים) is bound to a place; off the ground of revelation, he reckons himself beyond reach of both protection and presence. The conviction is real, the theology faulty — and the same verb sāṯar (“to hide”) describes God’s judicial hiding of His face elsewhere.
• כָל־מֹצְאִי יַהַרְגֵנִי “whoever finds me will kill me” renders כָל מֹצְאִי יַהַרְגֵנִי. The verb is הָרַג (hārag) — the very verb of v. 8, “and he killed him.” The murderer now fears being killed by the same word he used on his brother; the dread of the talion is written into the vocabulary.

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• לָכֵן “Not so!” follows the ancient versions (LXX ouch houtōs, Vulgate nequaquam), which read לֹא כֵן (lō kên). The Masoretic Hebrew has לָכֵן (lāḵên, “therefore”). A one-letter difference flips the sense from rebuttal (“Not so!”) to consequence (“Therefore…”). The threads flag this textual fork; BSB prints the versional reading.
• שִׁבְעָתַיִם “sevenfold” is שִׁבְעָתַיִם (šiḇ‘āṯayim) — seven being completeness. Avenged sevenfold means fully, certainly avenged. The number returns, monstrously inflated, in Lamech’s boast of seventy-sevenfold (4:24): mercy’s measure twisted into vengeance’s.
• אוֹת “a mark” badly misleads. The Hebrew is אוֹת (’ôṯ, “a sign”) — the same word as the rainbow-sign to Noah and the heavenly signs of 1:14. Ellicott: “Cain was not branded nor marked in any way”; God appointed a sign to protect Cain, not to stigmatize him. The popular “mark / brand of Cain” inverts the text’s mercy into a curse.

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• מִלִּפְנֵי יְהוָה “from the presence of the LORD” renders מִלִּפְנֵי יְהוָה — literally “from-before the face of YHWH.” It picks up Cain’s own dread in v. 14 (“from Your face I shall be hidden”): now he walks out from that face. Benson: “When Cain went out from the presence of the Lord, he never rested after.” The exile he feared he now enacts.
• נוֹד “Nod” transliterates נוֹד (Nôḏ) — and the place-name is the sentence: it means “Wandering,” from נוּד (nûḏ), the “vagrant” word of vv. 12, 14. Cain settles in the Land of Wandering — a restless name for a man who cannot rest. The irony is built into the Hebrew and lost in the English proper noun.
• קִדְמַת־עֵדֶן “east of Eden” renders קִדְמַת עֵדֶן (qiḏmaṯ ‘êḏen). The same east (קֶדֶם) where the cherubim were posted (3:24) and where Adam was barred from the garden. The line of exile runs ever eastward, away from Eden and from the face of God — the geography of the Fall extended.